The Real Ten Inch Hero

[the_rant_girl]

Title: The Real Ten Inch Hero
Pairing: Priestly/Dean Forrester
Fandom:Ten Inch Hero/Gilmore Girls crossover
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4267
Summary: So this kid's been coming into the sandwich shop every day for a week now maybe it's time to do something about that.

A/N: Written for transfixeddream's  prompt: Priestly's got a Prince Albert  on his bottom!Jared

Comments

[tmn1966]

The opening paragraph is just beautiful. I love the imagery of it - I can picture it clearly in my mind exactly how Priestly looks and each and every one of his moves.

And I am so in love with this line because there is so much truth in it:

It’s funny how you can want something for so long and so bad and then it just falls so far south of your expectations.

And I think it’s awesome that Priestly and Tish are still friend, and, in fact, Tish figured out about Priestly’s giant man crush! :D

And then there’s this:

That quirks Priestly’s brow, “Yeah? You get that from your books?” he teases.

“I hear things,” Dean shrugs trying to pass as casual, his eyes roving over Priestly and not too discretely.

“Good things?”

Dean’s gaze lingers just below Priestly’s belt before he looks back up to his eyes, “Guess we’ll just have to find out.”

Such delicious flirting.

And, yes, this, so much this:

“Easy tiger, don’t want it to be over before we even get started.”

Can’t forget this one either :D

Priestly pulls his Posse Magnet shirt up

[the_rant_girl]

Ahh honey what more can I really say to you? You were with me every single step of the way and you endured what must have been the most epic tease ever lol

thank you for taking the time to leave such a lovely, lovely comment here after all that torment lol you have such a uncanny ability for picking up on all the things that I myself most enjoyed writing.

And well you know how I feel about Danneel and so Tish just had to be Priestly's bff LOL

and gah it really does mean so much to me that you found the ending powerful, cause as you know very intimately it took me freaking forever to finally get there LOL and well I didn't want the end to feel cheap or rushed, even although I was kind of racing against the clock to get it done before tomorrow.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *glomps and smishes and squishes and smooches and smexes and twirls ya super duper fast until we fall over and then roll amongst the daisies*

I LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH HONEY!

all the hearts!

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[rockstarpeach]

Aw, this was cute and hot and funny!

Although it made me a little :(, because Priestly and Tish need to be together!

[the_rant_girl]

Aww, thank you so much sweetie! I'm glad you liked it!

and awww, yeah there's certainly fun to be had between that pair lol though we already know Tish isn't into threesomes lol ;P

*hugs*

♥

Edit: Ok I know I really shouldn't do this, but whenever I come back to this story, my response to you always makes me cringe so hard, and I'm always like "should I edit this" and then I'm like "Laura, a gagillion million fandom years have passed, just let it go." But yeah.

Okay so here's my correction of me, of course Tish wouldn't be into a non-consensual threesome, and it was just sprung on her and it was weird, and Tad was a douche anyway, and yeah it was weird and creepy and uncomfortable, he totally violated her trust, and I'm so glad Tish stood up for herself/stuck to her guns, and got the fuck out of there.

And I am totally here for any versions of Jensen and Danneel being together forever and ever *nods*

Heh, my apologies for my being a complete asshat.

[rockstarpeach]

No worries, sweetie. Trust me, I know what it's like to say something and then realise how stupid it must sound :)

And hey, I'd forgotten about this story, so editing this comment gave me an excuse to come back and read it again! Still smokin! And while it breaks my heart that he's not with Tish, I have to admit Preistly is pretty rockin with Dean.

[the_rant_girl]

Ahh, thank you so very much for your understanding and for re-reading, I'm very happy it still holds up lol and heee yes Dean is the only suitable alternative lol seriously, thank you, BB!! ♥♥

[orbiting_saturn]

The next time someone asks me my OTP, I'm gonna say Dean/Priestly. I freaking LOVE this pairing with a burning passion. And you wrote them so deliciously. I loved every word of this.

[the_rant_girl]

...*is speechless* WOW!

Thank you so very, very much for your lovely, lovely words, you have no idea how ridiculously happy this makes me! I'm so very, very pleased/thrilled/ecstatic that you enjoyed this, I really had so much fun writing these boys even if they nearly drove me insane *nods*

you have totally made my night!

*smishes*

♥♥♥

[hezio2]

You wrote the build up to them so wonderfully.
And I loved how much they enoyed 'exploring' each other.

[the_rant_girl]

Thank you so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the enjoyment of exploration lol they were definitely fun to write :DD ♥

[meesasometimes]

I did alot of this *gasp* *growl* *meep* *whimper* *purr*
XD WHAT A GREAT PAIRING!!!!!

LOL'd at the Posse Magnet shirt :) PERFECT! All that talk of piercings is making me think I'm missing out on something? VERY VERY HOT.

and please yes with the "Baby" talking all the time forever....just makes my insides melty.

These two need more fun sexy times in the future;)

[the_rant_girl]

heeee! *licks* :DD I love your reactions, you're so awesome *nods*

and yay!!! for the meltyness *does victory dance*

I just couldn't resist the Posse Magnet shirt :DD

And I am pleased that you liked the piercing stuff cause well that was completely uncharted territory for me, but Priestly had to have piercings that we just didn't get to see right? LOL

*smishes*

♥