She'll Eat You Alive

[the_rant_girl]

Title: Happy Trails (Part Three)
Series: The Overbite Saga
Characters: Dean, Darla
Rating: R
Medium: Fic
Word Count: 1800

Comments

[tmn1966]

I really like how you captured Castiel - he really doesn’t know any other level but intense. And, jeez, why don’t you just go ahead and kill me already. Your words, so brief yet so impactful:

And if an hour passes, before he finally pushes away from the only solid presence left in his life, he doesn’t notice.

As I told you last night, Dean’s sorrow and pain just jump off the page.

The conversation with Ben felt real, the words and gestures, Dean’s thoughts, it’s all there. This line really stood out to me, so much like a kid, so much hurt behind it:

“No! I don’t care if you’re sorry and I don’t care about you!”

Ugh, did I tell you yet that you’re killing me?

So Darla has been waiting for Dean for some time, huh? You’ve set up such an interesting story, sweetie. I’m hooked… even though I’m dead. ;)

♥♥♥

[the_rant_girl]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *tackles and smishes and revives you