She'll Eat You Alive

[the_rant_girl]

Title: Man's Got His Reasons (Part Two)
Series: The Overbite Saga
Characters: Dean, Lisa, Darla
Rating: R
Medium: Fic
Word Count: 1100
Author's Note: this chapter is of course a flashback, taking us to the very beginning of this tale, and to a couple of months after Sam jumped into the hole, this does not follow the show's timeline.

Comments

[big_heart_june]

Poor baby! gah. lovely writing, bb *sigh*

[the_rant_girl]

Thanks hon, and well you know it was important to establish how completely devastated Dean was by Sam's death, and not just because he would be, but well I felt it was the only thing that would push him into seeing vapirism as a valid option, and stopping there before this becomes a fully fledged ramble lol

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[tmn1966]

Another great beginning. I felt so bad for Dean and Lisa, especially with this:

He didn’t deserve her bed. He didn’t deserve her. This wasn’t what she had signed on for. He knew that she had known that there would be a ‘grieving period’ but that wasn’t what this was. This was a way of life.

So heartbreaking. And, oh god, this:

Those were the times it hurt even more. When he remembered. Knowing that somehow he'd dared to forget.

Well, if I quote any more, it’d be the whole damn thing. Your descriptive writing is so damn good. The whole sequence of Dean waking up in the Impala, his thoughts and his actions… I felt like I was watching Show!

And then in the bar. Ah, man, poor Dean.