Lovely story, I like the way Tim thinks and the feeling of normalcy in his situation. It is the way it is. Little thing though, the Chilean in me shrieked in rage when I read Tim's parents where in Chile and sent him a Machu Pichu card (that happens to reside in the lovely Republic of Peru) but that's me just nitpicking.
Poor Tim. I really like the flow of this, and once again I love that his parents aren't evil, just thoughtless, and I LOVE that Tim figures out all the things he does. Man, that last line is like a blow to the gut, too.
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