Comments | the_protagonist: Fic: "Black Masks and Gasoline" | Jason Todd, Tim Drake

the_protagonist

Fic: "Black Masks and Gasoline" | Jason Todd, Tim Drake | rated-r

Mar 29, 2011 16:09

Title: Black Masks and Gasoline
Fandom: DCU, Jason Todd, Tim Drake
Word Count: ~900 words
Rating: R. Because Jason drops the F-bomb at *least* 20 times.
Notes: I wrote this some time ago (November, maybe?) and submitted it anonymously... somewhere. I’m honestly not sure where. I decided to clean it up and share it with you, because I haven’t ( Read more... )

character: tim drake-wayne, character: jason todd, pairing: no pairing, genre: general, fiction, fandom: dcu, rating: r, length: 500 words or greater

Comments 18

necchan March 29 2011, 21:21:11 UTC

I... absolutely LOVE your Jason. Always. ♥
And every time I read something of yours, my exact thoughts are: "Oh, MY. This has got so much potential! Oh, pleasepleaseplease let this have a sequel!♥♥"
...yes, with the double hearts at the end.
So, in short: I loved this, I loved Jason, I loved that he saved Tim (and I'm JayTimbsessed, so you'll excuse me if I saw this as pre-slash...?), and I'd love reading more of this, if you ever felt so inclined! :D

the_protagonist March 30 2011, 00:48:34 UTC

<3

Thank you! I love Jason portrayed as Red Hood (pre-extra crazy Morrison), when he was just a bad-ass with a heart of gold. Nothing but a really tough guy with a hard outer shell with a creamy center.

There's no sequel in the works, but if you feel inspired *nudge-nudge wink-wink* you should definitely write it!

Re: Pre-slash...
Funny you should mention that. A friend asked, 'what happens when Tim wakes up?' And of course my fangirl reply was, 'Well, sexy-times, of course!' With Jason and Tim, that's always the answer right?! lol

Thanks for the lovely comment, dear! It made my night!

necchan March 30 2011, 08:55:45 UTC

Eh, I only speak the truth. Everything you write = Instant love

There's no sequel in the works, but if you feel inspired *nudge-nudge wink-wink* you should definitely write it!

Oooooooooh, thanks. ♥ I'm definitely tucking this permission safely away, for a time when I'm not in over my head with the monster-bunny that's the "Love Until We Bleed" Verse. I had the brilliant idea that boys needed some fun/quality time together before the angst kicked in in the second and third installment... and I'm half-way through writing the third interlude already. *scowls at Jason muse* *Jason muse grins back unrepetantly*

'Well, sexy-times, of course!' With Jason and Tim, that's always the answer right?! lol

Definitely! *GRINS*

saavikam77 March 29 2011, 23:41:04 UTC

Yikes!

Yep, that sounds like Gotham to me. I love the bit about Bruce thinking Gotham was *his*, when it *so* wasn't. And poor Tim, noble idiot. Love that Jason did the right thing with him and the little girl.

the_protagonist March 30 2011, 00:50:35 UTC

Tim - noble idiot *dies laughing*

That so is what he is, isn't it? I guess he takes after Dick in this sense. And yes! Jason, in my canon is forever and ever a bad-ass with a heart of gold. He's like a chocolate bar with a hard chocolate-y shell and a creamy, smooshy center, lol.

Thanks for the nice review! Totally makes my night!

niftywithan March 30 2011, 04:28:48 UTC

JASONNN. ♥______♥

And Tim, you silly knight-in-shining-spandex. Airline instructions are there for a reason. At least you have a jerkass with a heart of gold to save you.

This was simply wonderful - thanks for sharing! :D

the_protagonist March 31 2011, 17:35:49 UTC

Silly knight-in-shining-spandex:
Best. Imagery. Ever. fffft!

Thanks so much for the fantastical comment! It made my heart flutter all wonderfully-like. ^^

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the_protagonist March 31 2011, 17:36:04 UTC

Heee! Thanks for reading, love!

aravistarkheena March 30 2011, 21:19:11 UTC

Oh this was awesome and super intense.

I loved Jason's voice. It was very in your face and absolutely easy to relate to and empathize with.

Him saving Tim was just perfect. He just couldn't seem to help himself. I love how he helps the little girl too.

This was fantastic. You write an awesome Jason.

the_protagonist March 31 2011, 17:49:07 UTC

Jason can't ever help himself! He tries to be all hard and tough and 'I'm a mother-fucking island, yo', but *we* all know he's just a smooshy bear that wants a hug, right?

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment! I feel like I over-compensate for not knowing/understanding Jason very well by just having him swear a lot, so you saying that I write him well is such a relief!

I have this image that Jason is just one of those people that kids kind of instantly like; like he could be a little goofy, really kind of understands what kids like and how to 'get up to their level'.

Adorable-ness ensues.

Thanks for the nice comment! I'm so happy you liked it!