[Fic] Where the World Begins - Part 5

Jun 17, 2010 01:17



Where the World Begins
"I'm not an orphan on this earth, as long as this man lives on it."

Part 5... )

fic: big bang, fic: where the world begins, supernatural big bang 2010, fic: dean/castiel, fic: supernatural, dean/castiel, supernatural

Leave a comment

Comments 6

kittyfaelis June 19 2010, 13:44:59 UTC
Holy shit!

This is just gettin better and better. Magnificent!

And the sex is hot and intimate and perfect!

Reply

the_ninth_bow June 20 2010, 14:55:56 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think so!

I was hoping the sex would work out, so I'm glad to hear you say that! :o)

Reply


pyjamagurl June 21 2010, 15:27:29 UTC
Awesome!

I love the sex scenes, they are hot and sweet and desperate and lovely.

Faith is just adorable and I love how she is taking on traits of both her daddies xD

I could totally feel myself tearing up at the end there, with Dean leaving Faith with Bobby and then when he tells Ellen that yeah, he has something pretty good waiting for him when all this is over. I am such a sap, it's just so sweet and perfect.

I adore this story! I kind of don't want it ever to end *goes off to read the last part*

Reply

the_ninth_bow June 22 2010, 00:55:00 UTC
:oD

Awesome! These were the first really "explicit" sex scenes I've posted, so I was like, "eep!" so I'm glad you liked them!

I'm so glad you like Faith! And Dean and Cas just can't help but rub off on her... she's a smart girl ;o)

Aw! Those were actually some of my favorite scenes to write :oP I'm a sap, too haha, and I'll always say that's not a bad thing ;o)

Reply


maco2111 June 22 2010, 00:54:04 UTC
I'm almost at the end! :( I'm actually really sad to be nearing the end of the fic...

You can't even understand how warm & fuzzy I feel, having Dean being "undeniably, irrevocably, purely happy" with Cas. Their relationship is heartwarming. :)

I have to say, the sex scenes were incredibly written. You managed to perfectly convey passion & intimacy without being overly explicit. I love that so much. ♥

My heart was slowly breaking at the end, when Dean's leaving Faith with Bobby. You've got me so worried, 'cause I want everything to turn out alright, but at the same time I know everything's not gonna be all hunky-dory when it ends...

Reply

the_ninth_bow June 22 2010, 01:05:59 UTC
Aw! I'm sorry you're coming to the end, but I'm glad you're still enjoying it! *hugs*

Yay for warm and fuzzies! Dean deserves some happiness, and Cas is more than happy to give that to him :o)

And so happy to hear that you liked the sex scenes! I was a bit worried with how they'd turn out, so I'm glad they were successful!

The ending scenes were some of my favorite to write, so I'm glad they worked for you :o) Good luck with reading the ending, and I hope you enjoy it!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up