Title: Make A Wish [1/1]
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anothersujufanPairing: HaeHyuk (hinted ninja pairings)
Characters: SJ, SHINee, SNSD, f(x), Infinite
Rating: PG-13 (to be safe)
Genre: angst, romance
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: "Donghae, this is Lee Hyukjae." Donghae sees the boy in question, Hyukjae, glance up at the mention of his name, eyes flashing a startling silver before
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I did find a few spelling mistakes but, as a person who knows the program you use, it is expected. I will go through it and eat it up. Not sure when though because I have stuff to work on and sleep to catch up on.
Anyway.... you are amazing. And so is this story. I love it! <3
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Pft. >> Wordpad. It's my typing. My keystrokes are weird. And my keyboard is reeeeealy dirty. XD; But I have no compressed air here to clean it. *will do it at school*
Awwwwwww. :3 Thankie much! Honestly, I fel like it's not up to parr, so I might have to go through and add stuff later to fix the flow, but I do like how it's turned out for now. ^^; (Considering I only worked on it for what amounts to about....three days? Tops? XD
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HOW IN THE WORLD DO YOU WRITE SOMETHING SO LONG??? O_O i cannot.. T_T
and i like the pacing of this. =D blonde hyuk made me very upset initially.. especially after the transformation from his initial glorious red hair. =( but its growing on me. and GOSH. he looks so vulnerable/fragile so i could totally imagine him crying and it would just KILL anyone who sees it. much less donghae who we all know to be a softie at heart.. =p NICE ONE!
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.... I honestly don't know. I just write. It comes out. If it's not long enough, I embellish. .... It's usually long enough though. xD; Writing short things is a weakness of mine.
I love red!Hyuk (and I usually use/mention that in whatever au verse I write), but I realized that his blonde hair was more abnormal, specifically in this verse, and that was what I knew I was aiming for. Taemin, also a keeper, has his red hair here because it stood out more to me than, say, his blonde hair does now.
That scene was basically written back when I first decided on this storyline, but somehow it became a bit more angsty/dramatic and jshdgfkajdfh I love/hate when stories do that. .... Grow without my say so, I mean. xD; Writing it this evening basically did kill me. But I liked the way it turned out, so it's all good. That scene was the turning point, so of course Donghae felt bad after seeing that. *nodnod* Donghae can't resist Hyukjae's tears.
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i think no one can resist hyuk's tears tbh. =p hahaha.. now you're tempting me to type out and post my new one shot when really i should be tidying my new room. X_X
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I LOVE VULNERABLE HYUK!!!! *BECAUSE I WANT HAE TO BE THERE TO PROTECT HIM LOLOLOLOL*
THE MAIDS ARE BULLYING HIM??? *OFF TO SLAP SOME BITCHES*
OH MY - JEALOUS HAE KEKEKE MY FAVOURITE
AND THE ENDING IS SO SWE~~~~~~~~~~~~ET
I SUPER LOVE THE ENDING!!!!
THANKS FOR SHARING ^^
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thank you for sharing ^^
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