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{Fanfic} Pistol Trick

May 26, 2010 22:44

Title: Pistol Trick [1/1]
Author: the_mushuzuki
Fandom: Batman Nolanverse; semi-AU
Characters: HARVEY DENT; THE JOKER
Summary: Harvey Dent questions the Joker on the whereabouts of Rachel Dawes. (one shot)
Warnings: mild violence; gun fellatio
Disclaimer: Characters owned by DC comics; non-profit

( HARVEY DENT JOINS HAIR CLUB FOR MEN )

fanfic, the dark knight

Comments 12

jasmine_petal May 27 2010, 09:24:52 UTC

Freaking love it! <3

the_mushuzuki May 27 2010, 11:17:16 UTC

Thank you, April. :)

jasmine_petal May 27 2010, 19:59:24 UTC

^_^

Makes me want to go write a fanfic now! Lol. Although I probably should not... I would break so many Universes. >.

the_mushuzuki May 27 2010, 23:12:16 UTC

Reading other peoples' fanfic always makes me want to write my own and I finally managed to do it. I'd love to see yours if you ever decide to write one and I'd be interested to know which universes you'd break. I'm picturing Batman/MirrorMask crossover (and now I want it).

aisuyoukai May 27 2010, 16:40:28 UTC

...you lost me when the Joker started making love with the gun. Ffffft. X3

Okay, but, yeah. No, really, that was good. You always wonder just how that happened in between the parts they didn't show in a movie.

the_mushuzuki May 27 2010, 23:21:51 UTC

I love thinking about what alternate routes could have been taken in a story, especially one like TDK that leaves ample fodder for imagination. Really what I wanted was a scene where Harvey meets Joker as Harvey instead of Bacon Face but they never got a chance in the movie.

Thank you for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed.

aisuyoukai May 27 2010, 23:26:39 UTC

True, true. And I thought it fit quite nicely, frankly. Like it could have been a scene right out of the movie.

The subject caught my attention, of course~. Good job.

saint_bliss May 28 2010, 00:14:46 UTC

Okay, that ending WAS better. I didn't know it could get better. But it was better!

... ilu and your writing.

the_mushuzuki May 28 2010, 00:24:53 UTC

I figured I'd class it up a little with a body bag.

D'awww thnx. ♥ ♥ ♥

daylight_broke June 16 2010, 03:42:50 UTC

*adding "Pistol Trick" to Memories*

I love how you wrote the gun fellatio scene as simultaneously erotic and disturbing. There's a cliffhanger scene in a fanmade comic below (page 22) showing Harvey Dent about to interrogate the Joker. Now because of you, I'm picturing in my head the possible outcome of that interrogation scene in this fanmade comic.

( ... )

daylight_broke June 16 2010, 03:44:39 UTC

EDIT: Sorry, I mean to type "page 18." Not "page 22." Anyway, I hope you continue to write more Nolanverse fanfics. You're a good writer. :)

the_mushuzuki June 17 2010, 00:13:21 UTC

Thank you for checking it out and for taking the time to comment. Glad you enjoyed it. The Joker sometimes strikes me as an erotically disturbing kind of guy. ;)

Lol I can see where you're coming from with the cliffhanger thing. The bloody and beaten face of his would have made it even better. I'm surprised I haven't seen this fancomic before, thnx for linking.