Request Fic 4

Jan 31, 2010 14:55

Work flattened me like Wile E. Coyote this week, so this is much later than planned. But it's also much longer. Even stevens?

For thefourthvine, for the prompt You know how Spock is always getting disinhibited and being all emotional? What if Kirk got inhibited instead and got, you know, Vulcanesque?

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Kirk/Spock, McCoy, PG, ~2,600 words

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fandom: star trek reboot, fanfiction, pairing: kirk/spock

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archaeologist_d January 31 2010, 15:51:54 UTC
That was adorable in a Spock kind of way. Loved that Jim went into formal mode and Spock picked up on it immediately. Well done.

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the_moonmoth January 31 2010, 17:47:24 UTC
Spock actually noticing and wanting the old Jim back is actually the funniest thing to me in this fic :) Glad you enjoyed.

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danahid January 31 2010, 16:13:59 UTC
Lovely third-person observation, with everyone in-character and the interaction spot-on. I enjoyed this very much.

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the_moonmoth January 31 2010, 17:48:03 UTC
Thank you :) The outsider POV was definitely fun to write.

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acacia_123 January 31 2010, 16:16:30 UTC
well if bones would rather not listen, i'm all ears!

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the_moonmoth January 31 2010, 17:48:20 UTC
Hee! :-D

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the_moonmoth January 31 2010, 17:48:34 UTC
Thanks :)

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giandujakiss January 31 2010, 17:42:00 UTC
Oh, this was wonderfully sweet!

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the_moonmoth January 31 2010, 17:49:01 UTC
\o/ Glad you enjoyed

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