Fic: Five Times... [Kirk/Spock, PG-13]

[the_moonmoth]

Title: Five Times Jim Kirk Tries to Emotionally Compromise Spock, and One Time He Doesn’t
Author: The Moonmoth
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Words: ~2,500
Spoilers: Star Trek 2009
Warnings: None.
Summary: And when Jim's lying with his back against Chekov’s console, unable to move and with his vision fading around the edges as he begins to lose

Comments

[noein9]

I like this. A lot. I can't articulate why I like this yet, but I need to think on why.

Great job.

[the_moonmoth]

Glad you enjoyed :)

[danahid]

Very thought-provoking -- *great* characterization, beautiful language, and and interesting use of structure... I liked this very much. Thank you.

[the_moonmoth]

I'm so glad you liked the characterisation - it's always hard in a new fandom. Glad you enjoyed.

[gmonkey42]

I like how you wrote Spock's dialogue especially, it's spot-on.

[the_moonmoth]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked that esp :)

[the_moonmoth]

Thank you :)

[illariy]

Read and enjoyed. I loved the dialogue particularly for Spock. Thanks for sharing this. :-)

[the_moonmoth]

Thank you :)