Comments | the_lost_robot: Darkened: The hermit in the wilds (6/7)

the_lost_robot

Darkened: The hermit in the wilds (6/7)

Feb 17, 2013 12:44

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five

We now bring you to part six. Where there is lots of world building and mentions of stuff I really need to write.

( Prowl tries to have a talk with Jazz, the past remains painful aaaand Jazz and Zoom-Zoom get arrested. As usual. )

character: ratchet, story arc: a spark darkened, character: prowl, character: yoketron, verse: the lost bot, character: zoom-zoom, transformers fanfiction, character: ironhide, character: sunstreaker, character: jazz, title: a spark remembrance, character: sideswipe

Comments 6

exactly_what February 17 2013, 03:59:08 UTC

Well. Nice chapter. But... "Th end"???? How can it b the end??? We need to see everyone's reactions to Jazz and Zoom-Zoom, and- and... It can't be over? Well, at least there's the "for now" bit... Gah. This NEEDS more. ^.^

Great job, and I really enjoyed it. Especially the "escape". ^.^

the_lost_robot February 17 2013, 04:20:09 UTC

Oh LOL. I've been putting The End after I finish every chapter...then it turns out I still have more to write, so it gets edited again. I like to imagine that I'm finished with this little story but I know I'm not.

tainry February 18 2013, 08:45:17 UTC

“Well, aren’t we feeling ambiguous and ancient today,” Ratchet grunted
Heeheeheeheehee!
Yay! So glad to see Prowl finally in Ratchet's hands. ^^; ::relieved::

the_lost_robot February 18 2013, 09:06:02 UTC

*dies at the icon* I've seen it around a couple of times, who's is it?

I figured it was about time that Prowl got home and into the hands of a proper medic. If I left him too long in Jazz's company, I wasn't sure he was going to make it out alive...Jazz's sanity has slow been deteriorating over these past couple of chapters...

tainry February 18 2013, 09:48:00 UTC

It's one of pellimusprime's. ;DDD

Yeah. Grumpy Jazz is grumpy. o.O Zoom-Zoom continues to be cute, though. :)

the_lost_robot February 18 2013, 10:03:47 UTC

Grumpy Jazz has good reasons to be grumpy. He has lots and lots of issues, poor guy. And it's all Prowl!One's fault.

Heh, without ZZ this story wouldn't have been quite as fun. Er. Well, considering that Jazz probably would have murdered Prowl the first moment he got...it wouldn't have been fun at all D: