Coherent. Chapter Three. What is this craziness?

[the_lost_robot]

Was not expecting this chapter to be written so fast. Not betad, so all mistakes are mine

Comments

[exactly_what]

This is just so confusingly wonderful! :D Prowl is someone else (and you've really got me wondering who he was) Yoketron is some crazy ninja, and...

Well, it's incredibly engaging. :D I can't wait for more -- as usual. :D

[the_lost_robot]

Thanks ^_^ This chapter went completely off track, I thought I had sorted out Prowl!Two's issues in the previous chapter and then he was like, I have more probs, send me to Yoketron to fix them plz. I'm actually trying not to focus on the whole coherent thing, Prowl has so much plot to get through and we're only at the start! And yet it's taken me three chapters just to sort him out....

And then Immobilizer insisted he had probs, even though he wasn't supposed to. And then his conversation with Yoketron dragged on and on. I try to keep my OCs as unobtrusive as possible but yet somehow Immobilizer got plot and issues with Yoketron...

[exactly_what]

Lol. ^.^ Your OCs seem to be very forceful. But they're believable, so... I don't think you have to worry about it. :D

And anyways, problems are fun. ^.^ They make Plot, and Plot is fun. Well, reading it is, anyways. *smirks*