Comments | the_lost_robot: Darkened: The hermit in the wilds (7/7 Complete!)

the_lost_robot

Darkened: The hermit in the wilds (7/7 Complete!)

Mar 26, 2013 20:35

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six

More mentions of things that I really need to write about. Ah well. I'll get there someday never.

( In which there is craziness inside Prowl's head and a pair of ninjabots go for a stroll across Iacon )

character: ratchet, story arc: a spark darkened, character: prowl, character: yoketron, verse: the lost bot, character: zoom-zoom, transformers fanfiction, character: optimus prime, character: jazz, title: a spark remembrance

Comments 3

exactly_what February 26 2013, 15:31:06 UTC

Very nice... Loved Jazz's parting shot at Optimus. :D hehe.. Prime didn't even know they were in the brig, did he?

Very nice, and... well, I didn't think it was all that confusing. *shrugs* Great job, and I can't wait for more!

the_lost_robot February 26 2013, 23:05:16 UTC

Well, seeing as Optimus wasn't in the Autobot base when they rocked up and had been communing with the Matrix all this time, yeah, he had no idea xD

Given that I haven't written about some of these events, I thought it might be about confusing. Everything's all a bit jumbled and I'm going all over the place. I've even started another series following Jazz here: http://the-lost-robot.livejournal.com/9287.html

exactly_what February 26 2013, 23:09:35 UTC

Yeah, true... :D Hehe... Poor Optimus, always the last to know...

No, I think it was suitably mysterious, but easy enough to understand. Kinda like characters in books or movies who hint about their past, but never really say anything outright. Or leave the telling until later on.

EDIT: Going to read now. :D