Comments | the_kittchen: To Each Comes His Due by Moonbeam (Humour, Rated G)

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To Each Comes His Due by Moonbeam (Humour, Rated G)

Aug 16, 2004 17:34

Whoo! Since I haven't really answered any of Tomy's challenges since the original 'Moonlight' challenge -- if you want to get technical about things -- I decided I should make up for my deplorable lapse in community participation. Watching all those first season eps on DVD has also drawn some new insights to my attenion, thus breeding this lame- ( Read more... )

challenge responses, humor, kr fanfic, parody, kitt pov, moonbeamsfanfic

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foxmom August 16 2004, 17:56:42 UTC

Never let it be said you did not get all those challenges in this story!

Actually, it is quite a funny converstation! The best line in the story was...

**"'Honk If You Love Peace and Quiet'," Kitt muttered derisively and cut his driver off mid-word, shutting down the comlink. **

I can hear just how Kitt would say that! ;-)

moonbeamsfanfic August 16 2004, 21:36:14 UTC

Never let it be said you did not get all those challenges in this story!

It was only originally supposed to be two, but then I realised I'd inadvertently worked a third in. A chance came to slip a forth in, then there was a moment where I could fit a fifth... So I figured I was on a roll and should just shove the rest in, too. :D

Thanks for reading! :)

dknightshade August 16 2004, 18:08:33 UTC

Why do I get the idea that you and I are seeing the same things in the season 1 DVDs? My muse was feeling a little bit vindictive about some of the things I find annoying in Michael's character. *g*

But I love it. I also like the line where Kitt cuts him off. That's so perfect.

moonbeamsfanfic August 16 2004, 21:45:36 UTC

Why do I get the idea that you and I are seeing the same things in the season 1 DVDs?

Probably because your Evil Influence(tm) knows no bounds? ::innocent grin::

You wanna know the weirdest observation I made watching all those DVDs? There's this one phone, an old vintage rotary phone that's white with gold trim, which we see in over half of the episodes. Why I noticed that, I can't say... but it became almost a game to me to spot it while I watched. ;)

dknightshade August 18 2004, 14:07:29 UTC

My EI has been acting up again. *g*

That is strange about the phone. I'll have to keep an eye out for it now. ;-)

stormr_d August 16 2004, 18:50:56 UTC

BWHAHAHAHA*cough*..HA! How funny!^_^ I could imagine the whole thing.

Now I wanna finish writing my stories now!*grumbles* blasted wannabe world dominating plot bunnies of mass destruction...

*cheery* This calls for a Michael/Kitt whump fic as an award^_^

Storm
(gonna try to write despite how sick she is.)

moonbeamsfanfic August 16 2004, 21:48:22 UTC

Thanks Storm, I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. And found it so funny! :D I was worried the humour might have fallen flat, what with me trying to force all those challenges into it. ;P

And some more Michael/Kitt whump-fic will always be appreciated! :D

vespurrs August 16 2004, 19:26:39 UTC

Ok. Can post now. I really liked this, as always. :) Very creative, and the dialogue was spot on. I could see and hear everything that was going on. Very nice.

moonbeamsfanfic August 16 2004, 21:50:28 UTC

Thank you, Vespurrs. ::hugs::

And I'm glad you're moment of fright has passed. ('Meep' is right! :0)

pheral August 17 2004, 00:27:57 UTC

LOL, but it was good! made me grin... (and god knows that basically impossible at 8.30am)

moonbeamsfanfic August 17 2004, 20:19:38 UTC

::giggles:: At least you're awake at 8:30am! My eyelids refuse to lift before ten in the morning, no matter what. ;P