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More Than Meets the Eye (KR/TF07 crossover)

Mar 29, 2008 20:16

Title: More Than Meets the Eye

Rating: PG (li'l bit of language)

Words: ~2400 (gasp, shock!)

A/N: Why are there not fifty bazillion fics crossing these things over? There should be. Michael Knight = Ambassador to the Autobots Y/Y I have no beta. If I had a beta I should put them in my basement and feed them on BabyBel cheese and Klondike bars and call ( Read more... )

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vespurrs March 30 2008, 02:18:39 UTC

I admit it, I LOL'd. Very cute, and a good start. Some really funny lines in there, too.

If I were a beta, I could totally live off of BabyBels and Klondike bars.

erisinia March 30 2008, 16:59:56 UTC

Why thankee. 8) Not quite sure if 'tis a start or just a vignette, but we'll see.

Say, if you've ever the time and the inclination please do feed my greed and improve my writing by pointing out the good lines to I can do it again. XD

moonbeamsfanfic March 30 2008, 04:23:32 UTC

Okay, there's an OFC but so far she's not obviously a Mary-Sue, so that's a tentative yay! And her three baby bots are cute! Chaos's sheepishness was very adorable. I like that they didn't instantly become evil like poor Dewbot or Nokiaphone, although you will have to explain that one at some point ( ... )

erisinia March 30 2008, 17:05:07 UTC

I'm very concerned with avoiding Sueishness, it's true. She's not anyone's love interest or long-lost relative, she doesn't save the day, and she isn't a gorgeous genius. So I have hopes. (Okay, Michael kind of adopts her but he adopts strays all the time. It's sorta his thing.) I actually had an explanation for the non-evil (though I don't know if the characters will ever know): all the others were influenced at creation by the nearby presence of big bad Megatron, but these fellows had Jazz right there affecting the energy. So that's my explanation.

Thanks for your comment. Should I continue, I will definitely consider asking for your l337 ski||z. :)

ladyrazorsharp April 1 2008, 09:00:41 UTC

LOL! This was a treat to read. Poor KITT!

giant freakin' robot so help me baby Moses ROTFL!

Using the shockwave was a really cool way of doing this. KITT just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time!