A Moment to talk (KR, PG)

[spacerat1]

I finally finished a story I had started a long time ago. Hope you like it! I'm not happy with the title but I couldn't think of anything else.

Title: A Moment to talk
Author: spacerat1
Rating: PG
Summary: The elevator stops moving.
Disclaimer: Glen A. Larson and Universal own the Knight Rider characters in this story.

A Moment to talk

Comments

[senatordotcom]

That's probably the best no-KITT-involved story ever. It was awesome banter between the characters.

The dialog bothered me at a few times, toss a few contractions in there to better simulate how people talk.

Ooo, and don't worry about the title, it fits perfectly.

Now do we get a follow up to see if Bonnie would tell Michael how she felt comfy in Michael's arms? :)

[spacerat1]

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I changed the dialogue - you were right, it sounded a bit artificial without contractions.

It's an open ending, so yes, looks like there will be a follow up :)

[ki2k]

I have to agree with Scott - it's nice to read a story once in a while that focuses on the actual humans in the show. :) As I'm leaning more and more toward being a Bonnie/Michael 'shipper, I really appreciated this. Yay for follow-ups!

~ Vespurrs

(shhhh subliminal messages)

[dknightshade]

Be a Bonnie/Michael shipper. Be a Bonnie/Michael shipper. Be a Bonnie/Michael shipper. Be a Bonnie/Michael shipper. Be a Bonnie/Michael shipper. Be a Bonnie/Michael shipper. Be a Bonnie/Michael shipper.

*grins*

Re: (shhhh subliminal messages)

[vespurrs]

Methinks mehears a birdie, in me wittle ears!

Pretty much since a conversation a while ago with nightwind69 I have indeed started to drift away from Kitt/Michael and to Bonnie/Michael.

Don't need much convincing. :) You write them so well! *HINT HINT*

:D

Re: (shhhh subliminal messages)

[dknightshade]

*laughs* Yes, a little birdie indeed, trying to win you over to the dark side.

Thank you. *blushes* I was listening to music today that totally had me wanting to write KR. But now I'm on the hook for a Stargate ficathon entry of doom (it's much longer than I should ever attempt for something with a deadline).

My driver on the way home had the KR theme ring tone on his cell phone. It made me grin from ear to ear.

[gumnut]

Great to see you writing again, Ratty :D

I really like the idea that Bonnie didn't know about Michael's past when they first met. It would certainly explain a great deal.

And why am I now suspicious that Michael knew something about why the lift stopped? ::eyes both him and Kitt:: Hmmm...

Nice little fic. Thanks so much for writing and posting.

Nutty
(off sick from Ork again today)

[spacerat1]

Hope you feel better soon!

They never really explained if Bonnie know who Michael was when they started working together. They must have told then but I'm not sure she knew from the beginning on.

Hmm.....so you think Michael and Kitt planned that? ;)

Thanks for the feedback!!!

[dknightshade]

Very well done, dear. *grins* Poor Michael, he is a bit hen-pecked isn't he? Cute story. And I'm totally with Nutty. Michael and Kitt set that up, didn't they? ;-)

[spacerat1]

;-) Well, maybe they did set it up.....

Thanks for the feedback!!! :)