"True Beauty" from the rw/hg ldws Challenge

Apr 05, 2009 09:32


Title: "True Beauty"
Word Count: 488
Rating: G

I would like to thank AccioHBP for the beta work!  I wanted to use an rw/hg ldws icon, but I am completely computer and LJ illiterate! *sighs*  I wish everyone good luck for round 3!  (I'm a nervous wreck!!!)

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spidergirl30 April 5 2009, 14:02:46 UTC
Wow, so beautifully written and portrayed, T. :)
I can see them in that moment as you wrote them, sadness, tiredness filling them but also a glint of hope and a promising life together as they knew they loved each other uncoditionally held by their hearts.
I really loved it!
Thanks for sharing and good luck for next round! :D
XXX

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missgranger2 April 5 2009, 14:10:32 UTC
Thank you so much for your lovely comments! I took more time with this drabble versus last week's but still worried over it. I am nervous to see what the prompt will be for round 3!!!

Thank you again, sis for your lovely comments as it means so much to me!!! *hugs*

*loves*
T

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missgranger2 April 5 2009, 14:14:18 UTC
I just found out what the new prompt is... it's mine... "Ron's Hands".

*sighs* I'm a bundle of nerves now!!!

XXX,
T

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spidergirl30 April 5 2009, 14:18:09 UTC
Ohohoho, that's a wonderful prompt!
*grin*
Ron's hands and its possible uses...
*winks*
Good luck!

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drcjsnider April 5 2009, 15:07:00 UTC
So sweet... loved the ending

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missgranger2 April 5 2009, 15:11:16 UTC
Thank you dearest! This week is going to be a nightmare! *sighs*

Have a lovely week!!!!

XXX

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scribhneoir1 April 5 2009, 15:50:20 UTC
this is great, I really like the sense of hope and a better future that you suggest through the image of the sunset...it's a powerful way to suggest the end of one part of their lives and the beginning of another.

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missgranger2 April 5 2009, 15:55:43 UTC
Thank you so much! That means so much to me coming from somebody of your writing caliber. And you really get the message I was trying to convey in the drabble.

Good luck to you this week!!! Of course, I know you'll make it to the next round!!! (>:

*hugs*

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redheadsarehot April 5 2009, 15:57:51 UTC
This was wonderfully beautiful, it gave me goosebumps. :D Awesome job!!

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missgranger2 April 5 2009, 15:59:55 UTC
Oh, thank you dearest! This drabble challenge is really hard for me. Pray that I can hold on for another week!!! *sighs*

*hugs*

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pili204 April 5 2009, 16:43:12 UTC
You know, this was my favorite of the whole bunch. I love the moment, the mix of sadness with hope. You outdid yourself!

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missgranger2 April 5 2009, 16:54:08 UTC
That is so lovely of you to say that! *sniffs* Thank you so much! I don't really know how this week's challenge will go dearest. I wish you luck and again thank you so much for your lovely comments!

*SMOOCH*

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