Kismet

Oct 12, 2008 17:47

Title: Kismet
Author: writerwannabe
Prompt: present
Rating: PG
Word Count:100 (x 3)
Warnings: DH Spoilers
Notes: Because a few of you have asked...here's your three part sequel for the three part drabble "Happenstance". I suggest you read that one first. It can be found here

Kismet )

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spidergirl30 October 13 2008, 14:49:47 UTC
“A while now,” he admitted. “We’ll find a place on your first Hogsmeade trip and I’ll read some to you.”
Awwww...

*melts*
*grin of joy*

I loved this so much! I love your Ron to pieces, you are one of the best writing him. :)
Thanks for continue this!
*fans self*

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writerwannabe October 13 2008, 17:16:14 UTC
I definitely enjoy writing Ron the most. And I get a lot of practice as it as I play Ron on a RPG forum.

Thanks for the nice comments

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maybe1ce October 13 2008, 19:32:26 UTC
Total hijack:

On which RPG are you Ron? I am a secret lurker on a shameful number of RPG's, and I am either stalking you already or I need to add another to my list.....

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still_infinity October 13 2008, 17:40:05 UTC
A really nice sequel to the previous drabbles. I love Ginny's Ron stop groping her!

I think I forgot to comment on the last entry.*is ashamed*
I liked that one, too, but I didn't get the end. Why the 'Her-min-ee' at the end. I get that he 's dreaming but why does Ron hear Victor talking? I seem to be a bit thick here.

I was wondering if you are planning to continue your R/H WIP or if you intend to write some longer fics (>1000 words)again.

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writerwannabe October 13 2008, 18:30:06 UTC
In the original format I had *************************** this separating the "HERMIONE!" from "Er-my-nee".

It's not Viktor who's speaking, it's Ron. In HBP when Ron's poisoned and unconscious, Ginny Harry, Hermione, George and Fred are standing around Ron's beside talking. Ron's moving about restlessly and he unexpectedly says "Er-my-nee" and they all think he's about to wake up, but he doesn't.

So what happens in italics is Ron having a dream where he's not with Lavender. Instead he's with Hermione (which is what he's always wanted). The book he's reading from IS real (at least for this drabble series). He DID buy it for Christmas 5th year but couldn't bring himself to give it to her and instead gave her the unusual perfume.

Which R/H WIP are you referring to? THe Late Watch or another WIP?

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still_infinity October 13 2008, 18:38:53 UTC
Thank you for being so patient and exlpaining it to me. I didn't remember the scene you mentioned above. Now I get it.

Which R/H WIP are you referring to? THe Late Watch or another WIP?
I was referring to Separate Bedrooms. Sorry for not making it clear.

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writerwannabe October 13 2008, 19:24:00 UTC
Ah, I was just looking back at that series as a matter of fact. I have a rough outline for the next story that takes place the following day.

I'm just trying to get the Late Watch done.

And I'm just about done with a fic that's about 2000 words for flashfic_rhr because my poor community is dying and needs new fics.

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maybe1ce October 13 2008, 19:34:45 UTC
So sweet....and I love how you managed to get Ron to do something quite romantic while still being recognizable as our awkward, honest Ron.

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daisymaeevans October 13 2008, 20:47:39 UTC
Happy sigh! I love fics about the how Ron and Hermione handle her going back to Hogwarts. This is wonderfully romantic while still in character. Great job!
Hugs-
Daisy

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dantifale October 14 2008, 12:56:19 UTC
So now Ron's dream is coming true. I love your Ron you show him as so much more than some think he is.

“Come on, Head Girl,” Ginny called as she strode passed them. “Ron stop groping her, the train’s going to leave!”

Such a short story showing so much love, and humor too. Just great.

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