Better Man, a RHr fic

[aloemilk]

Title: Better Man
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Comments

[missgranger2]

This was so eloquent and positively beautiful. I love your emotional depth and range. I am so jealous, dear! (>:

Wonderful job, dearest!
XXX

[aloemilk]

and WHY would you be jealous?! No reason, dear!

thanks for the comments. I write to understand them better... depth and range is something I strive for--- even if I make a mess of it in the process ;)

mega hug!

[daisymaeevans]

Okay, I can't stop crying now! Thank you so much for this beautiful story.
Hugs-
Daisy

[aloemilk]

Crying? Wasn't quite my intention, but I'm so glad it moved you!
Thank you for the review :D

[pili204]

This is absolutely wonderful! I think you did a great job tapping into who they are and how they interact, not only with each other but in general.

This line is my favorite because it represents who Ron is, how he works so well:

“Your magic is the strongest when you feel the need to protect someone, or in a fight, or when you need to solve problems by thinking out of the box.

I'm so glad you're writing more. Keep it up!

[aloemilk]

thank you thank you!

That's what I was aiming for when writing this fic. It took me a while (and missgrander2) to put it down in a way that was understandable, so it feels great to know you felt it worked.

I will keep writing!

and, btw....

HAPPY BDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
may this new year in your life be full of great things!!!

[cokieisme]

Very, very, good. Hope to read more soon!

[aloemilk]

thanks!
I hope to be posting more soon ;)

[spidergirl30]

This was too wonderful for words, dear aloemilk!
I love your emotional depth and range as you wrote them.
One of my fav R/Hr fics I have ever read surely! I hope you may share more fics here, 'cause your work is great!

[aloemilk]

wow, thanks a lot!
it boosts my confidence to get such a great review. Makes the process of writing even more enjoyable :)

I hope to have another one ready soon! it's giving me a little trouble, but I still have the idea stuck in my head ;)