Fanfiction challenge: The Soul

[marjorie16]

Title: The Soul (One-shot)
Author: marjorie16
Prompt: “The answer was clear. Shoot her.”
Summary: Her name was Earth-Born because she was born on Earth. Her parents were, like every Soul, perfect citizens of the nation. They lived peacefully in society. But Earth-Born has always felt different because, unlike other Souls, she didn’t have the silver

Comments

[merielrose]

Wow. That's heartbreakingly beautiful.

[marjorie16]

thanks so much!

[schneeengel]

OMG, your story is unbelievebal good. So sad, but your writing style is fantastic. It sounds like it could happen in the book.

[marjorie16]

I got the idea when SM said something about the sequels being named The Soul or The Seeker. SO, yeah, this is my version of how I think it'll happen if there will be a sequel.

thanks for the review!

[saddestimeofday]

Wow, that was amazing. Keep writing; you are really good.

[marjorie16]

Thank you! I love writing and will continue to write until I'm old and decrepit...so there! lol

[shadybrightside]

I went in reading not really knowing what to expect and I really liked the whole human twist! It's kind of sad because since she doesn't even realize she's a human or what a human is, it means that a lot of time has passed since the invasion.

I really loved the part when Wanderer told her what she was. Really awesome. :)

[marjorie16]

You know that baby Wanda, Ian and Jared saw? Their conversation about hope? Earth Born is that baby girl. So yeah, a lot of time has passed since the invasion.

Thank you!

[purple_flow]

that was so sad, but so good! I loved it!

[marjorie16]

Thank you sooo much!