Drabble: Next of Kin (Sookie Stackhouse; Adele)

Jan 13, 2010 11:29

Written for devohoneybee, who requested Adele Stackhouse and the time she met some "interesting" people (but didn't consciously remember later). I might have taken some liberties with the prompt.

If there's anything you want me to write, you can still leave your prompts here.

Spoilers for book 8, From Dead to Worse.

Adele Stackhouse. PG. Fintan, she almost ( Read more... )

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orange_crushed January 13 2010, 00:43:41 UTC
hair wet from a swim

God, you are so very good at this. What a perfect blend of mythology and tragedy and loveliness, in those hours before dawn. I always like your Adele, both practical and romantic in turns.

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the_grynne January 13 2010, 00:54:15 UTC
Thank you, m'dear. :)

I always like your Adele, both practical and romantic in turns.

I love Adele, I find her so interesting. She is what Sookie might grow up to be, should she be so lucky.

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devohoneybee January 13 2010, 03:04:32 UTC
Oh that's breathtaking! And moving. And sad. And beautiful.

Please feel free to take liberties with any prompt I give you, ever. Thank you so very, very much. Your details are exquisite, and so particular... the cooling cocoa, the ache of sleeping in a bad position, and the reason for sleeping that way...

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the_grynne January 13 2010, 03:19:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it.

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caraway_ January 13 2010, 03:18:29 UTC
That was very touching and sad.

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the_grynne January 13 2010, 03:20:32 UTC
Thank you. :)

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ooshady_girloo January 14 2010, 06:07:44 UTC
And the glow was not a glow at all, but the porch light, shining behind him, and through him.

unsettling and great imagery. 'twas haunting, no pun intended.

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the_grynne January 14 2010, 07:41:39 UTC
Thank you very much!

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missnyah January 14 2010, 15:02:05 UTC
This whole story was lovely but the image that struck me most was:

"It was turning light outside, and when she looked out through her curtains, she could see the Deputy Sheriff's car sitting empty in the yard."

Because that's when you know, lights flashing, car empty, there's trouble.

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the_grynne January 14 2010, 22:59:54 UTC
Thank you! I wasn't sure if that image was clear enough to convey what's happening, so it's lovely to have your input.

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