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[citiesfalling]

Title: The First Kiss Phenomenon and Other Justifications For Loving People and Programs
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Quorra/Rinzler/Junior but not necessarily in that order.
Wordcount: 2343
Summary: Six first kisses.

Comments

[mulder200]

Ah! That was quite sweet!

[citiesfalling]

Thanks. :D

[bionic]

Wonderfully sweet :) Love the last paragraph, beautiful!

[citiesfalling]

Thanks <3

[hey_giffy]

RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR <3

okay I'm pretty sure the Junior/Quorra one is my FAVORITE because AUGH so cute I just do not even know how to deal with it

lovelovelovelovelove

[citiesfalling]

They're just such a romcom love affair. <3

[igrab]

oh my god going to cry or something.

But the funny thing about perfection is that it's unknowable, and yet, right in front of your eyes all the time. - just lost it there and started handflailing ridiculously, just, YES.

They meet cute like the people in movies do. - I just, that's perfect, that whole section is perfect (well, they all are) and ahsdjgkl;fjslk

and the last paragraph, the last line, OH ALL OF IT.

[citiesfalling]

100 points for direct callbacks!

[cryspeaches]

This. This forever. FOREVER I SAY.

I love the flow of it, and the way that it is SO STUPID CUTE without being completely twee. I like the almost otherworldly feel you get through the way the sentences are constructed, and the moods conveyed.

<3

[citiesfalling]

Thank you. <3 I tried to convey a separate overall feel with each scene, and I'm glad that it more or less worked.