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Whilst Thy Were Absent chapter 4

May 21, 2010 22:37

Title: While You Were Gone chapter 4
Author: Xilvrin
Rating: R for this chapter for VIOLENCE and DARK THEMES, a few semi-censored swears
Pairing: Richie misses Virgil. Virgil misses Richie too, but not in the same way.Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters from Static Shock or DC comics, they belong to their specific creators/DC/Warner ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

green_phantom4 May 22 2010, 03:01:46 UTC

That was an awesome reason.

This was extremely well written and very emotional, nice job.

xilvrin May 22 2010, 03:58:36 UTC

Thanks. Wasn't sure how people would feel about the Gear/Hotstreak-ness. (that's all there will be of it... and he did it more to freak him out than anything)

inugurl107 May 22 2010, 03:15:36 UTC

I loved Richie's comment to Hotstreak! That was awesome!! And I love when someone makes a crack at Richie and Virgil with some "boyfriend" or "boy-toy" insult!

Poor Richie. In utter denial. It seems he's doing well for himself without Static there, though.

And poor, poor Virgil! Oh, gosh! I hope he gets out to reunite with Richie soon! Oh, and his family, too. No offense to them or anything, but I hope there's that reunited kiss; or Richie makes an invention so Virgil could just... forget it all.

He could totally borrow Will Smith's flashy mind eraser thingy from MIB!!

Awesome job! I cannot wait for another chapter!

xilvrin May 22 2010, 03:57:11 UTC

The part with Virgil was semi-cannon (to the comics). It is mentioned that he was locked up for a long time because he nearly killed the entire crowd. It's wasn't shown. But yeah.
The Ravager vs Fever fight was absolutely cannon. The Terror Titans comic could be a bit gory.

I have one more chapter to cover Terror Titans, then some chapters with the Teen Titans, then... a surprise.

No kiss, but something else planned. It won't be a downer ending, I promise. I hate downer endings.

inugurl107 May 22 2010, 04:20:37 UTC

Really? Only one more chapter for the whole Dark Side Club section?

Something BETTER than a reunited kiss!? :O

xilvrin May 22 2010, 05:23:03 UTC

Yes. one more fight set up, then he gets freed. just like in the comics. The comics focus more on all the people in the DarkSide club, but I'm only focusing on what happens to Static next chapter.

Hmmm. Not better than a kiss (I'm keeping the shipping here mainly emotional rather than physical), but something nice.
They WILL be reunited, rest assured.

shinju90 May 22 2010, 05:23:27 UTC

Poor Richie, poor Virgil...Both missing each other so terribly.
I can't wait for their reunion!

xilvrin May 22 2010, 05:42:23 UTC

Thanks. you'll have to wait, it will be a while before they see eachother in person again. and a while for me to write chapters... *slow writer*

ashleyalive June 9 2010, 03:07:03 UTC

OM MY GOODNESS. i cannot wait until chapter 5. no really. YAY.

even thought i HATE shebang, you made her actually likable in this. and that bit with hotstreak was TOO funny. JUST the right amount of slashyness without being ridiculous. and your right. he has a reason now ;)

although I feel for virg. the dark side club or whatever it is sure is violent. D: