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First One-shot!

Apr 22, 2010 07:46

Title: Anniversary
Author: Jennybird
Rating: PG
Characters: Virgil and Richie
Disclaimer: Man, if I owed this stuff, the finale of Static Shock would have been Virgil and Richie kissin'. They were not, so.... they're not mine.
Author's notes: uhm.... I don't know. I like Virichie love. Beware my fangirl powers.

( Anniversary )

one-shot, fic-rating-pg

Comments 8

hollyboo2001 April 22 2010, 16:07:17 UTC

So sweet and hot at the same time!
Love it! :D

bluejennybird April 22 2010, 16:29:35 UTC

Thanks! =D I really enjoyed writing it.

green_phantom4 April 22 2010, 18:48:52 UTC

Awwwww~ This is adorable! Much love to you~

inugurl107 April 22 2010, 23:30:30 UTC

"You could start by telling him that."

Best. Line. Ever. This was REALLY cute. I love the VxR fluff! Keep writing, deary!

Sidenote- At the end, you started using their hero persona even though they were still in civvies. Might want to watch for that. It gets confusing, and I belive most see Virgil and Virgil and Static as Static, and vise-versa with Richie being Gear.

bluejennybird April 23 2010, 05:34:44 UTC

I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the tip!!!

xilvrin April 23 2010, 02:47:08 UTC

Very cute. And a very boyish kind of love. Roughhouse, then make-up.

But I have to agree with Inugurl that it's less awkward if you only call him Static when he's in costume, and Virgil when he's out of costume (the same for Gear).

ashleyalive May 14 2010, 21:41:06 UTC

that punching and think making out this was BRILLIANT. my heart positively skipped a beat! I love how they were both boys about it, and not cheesy! :)

bluejennybird May 19 2010, 02:16:44 UTC

Thanks, I generally try to keep in mind that they are teenagers and are guys, and would be a little awkward at first.