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Fic: Unrest of Obsession

Jun 16, 2006 12:48

Title: Unrest of Obsession
Author: totallystellar
Genre: Drama/minimal Angst
Summary: One-shot, mainly Jimmy POV, Richie-centric. Jimmy Osgood comes back to Dakota Union High for Senior year. He can't get over what he did to Richie. Confrontation eventually occurs. Better than it sounds.
Spoilers: Up to "Jimmy", at least.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: ( Read more... )

author-totallystellar, one-shot, fic-rating-pg, title-unrest of obsession

Comments 10

writinnblood June 16 2006, 20:53:58 UTC

Wow. That is amazing. And incredible. And totally like Richie.
You deserve something for that. more than a cookie. A cake maybe? Yes, a cake. -=gives totallystellar a cake=-

totallystellar June 16 2006, 22:37:30 UTC

Goshh thank you! I gratefully accept any desserts you give me. XD And I'm glad that I got Richie in character -- that type of thing is really important to me.

Thank you again for commenting. :)

jade_dragoness June 17 2006, 04:24:20 UTC

wow.....wow....seriously I'm having a hard time being coherent because 'wow' is stuck on repeat in my mind.

....wow.

totallystellar June 19 2006, 20:32:00 UTC

Thank you? XD I'm hoping that's a good wow.

jade_dragoness June 20 2006, 06:59:31 UTC

It's a good wow. *nods frantically*

silverprism June 17 2006, 05:44:30 UTC

Fantastic story! You did great with Jimmy obbsessing over things, not making it too overwhelming, but definantly showing how things ate him up. And when he pulled out the gun, whew! I winced and cringed for him. And the ending was perfect. Not totally happy, but not as bad as it had been.

totallystellar June 19 2006, 20:33:23 UTC

Yesss positive feedback equals author happiness. Thank you for the detailed comment. :) Have you see my other one-shot When To Run? It's Sharon-centric, and I posted it here a while ago.

silverprism June 21 2006, 04:05:39 UTC

I.... think I've read it? Now I'll have to go searching for it. ^_^

totallystellar June 23 2006, 02:05:12 UTC

I'm pretty sure this is the link. It was pretty far back in the community.

http://community.livejournal.com/the_gas_station/84672.html#cutid1

ashchethem January 11 2008, 07:10:26 UTC

Holy sh- It just accured to me! Isn't Richie's middle name Osgood? Jimmy's last name is Osgood... No, It doesn't mean anything, realization just hit.

ANYWAY, Back to you fic. I think I might have read this on ffn... Maybe... It's a great story either way. I really enjoyed it. Thanks so much for posting it. =]