sublymonal - fic: after the tone - nc17

[sublymonal]

TITLE: After The Tone
AUTHOR: sublymonal (beta by ch_ch_chinatown ♥)
PAIRING: Michael/David. Very, very brief mention of David/Kim.
RATING: NC-17 (for language and sexual content)
SUMMARY: Considering David is overseas, Michael decided to leave him a few messages and waits all night for a call back. But when he finally gets one, it's well worth the

Comments

[matertenebrarum]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, and don't play any of those boring ass poems you call songs for those guys, they'll just boo you off the stage... kidding.

^^^ I LOLED.

He had it on the setting where the phone would ring, vibrate and glow if he got a message or a call. It basically did everything but self-destruct to wake him up so he didn't miss David's call.

^^^ omg I've done that before when was waiting for a phone call. not from david cook, but, ya know. stuff.

THE PARAGRAPH WHERE YOU DESCRIBE THEM GOING FURTHER AND FURTHER WITH EACH OTHER ON THE COUCH IS ONE OF MY FAVS EVER. <3

Can't comment on the sex. Don't want to sound pervy like before. I'll just give you a hearty handshake, a thumbs up, and some more !!!!!!!!!

[sublymonal]

I kinda loved that progression of them making out too
I MEAN. WUT. I CAN'T WRITE PORN SO SHUSH.

but feel free to sound pervy. I like pervy comments? It means I did something right?

[matertenebrarum]

LIAR. aka. *bribes you to write more*

no, i've given up perving as my new years resolution. :)

[sublymonal]

omg, I'm so glad you weren't waiting for it to end.
I tried not to make it too long in case people were like OMG JUST FINISH ALREADY. Then again, we can never have too much porn...

[mom_o_cass]

two thumbs up - so sexy!!

[sublymonal]

thank you :]

[momma_dar]

that was really great.
♥

[sublymonal]

thanks! :D

[princessleia04]

That was great - I loved it.

So hot!

[sublymonal]

haha, thanks. Sometimes I think I go overboard with the big words and ruin the "hot factor" :P