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If You Leave

Dec 12, 2008 19:44

Title: If You Leave
Author: Riversorrowdh
Disclaimer: None of this happened
Rating: PG-13 for sad Mavid.
Summary: Michael asks David to leave.
AN: Song fic to Guns 'n' Roses' Don't Cry. I'm thinking of making this into a series...

( If You Leave )

fanfic: pg-13

Comments 9

micheleeeex December 13 2008, 04:10:41 UTC

*heart breaking*

angst D':

riversorrowdh December 13 2008, 15:28:31 UTC

I know... :( thanks for commenting! :)

aike_for_me December 14 2008, 00:06:12 UTC

*sobs* how dare you? now you must write some happy fluff to chase all the terrible angst and sadness away! ;-)

riversorrowdh December 15 2008, 21:31:55 UTC

aww :( sure! :)

brainzz_insanee December 15 2008, 22:58:13 UTC

It's nice to find a story that's, sure, a bit cheesy but you made it work so good. Sometimes stories go over the top with "cheese" but I like this, alot. The composition and how you set up the scenes with the lyrics was very organized. The song sounds lovely, I'll have to take a listen to it sometime.

Anyway <3 Hehe, I'll stop babbling ( ... )

riversorrowdh December 16 2008, 22:08:57 UTC

thank you, thank you, thank you! haha i didn't expect to get a comment so long! More is coming soon...promise! XD

brainzz_insanee December 16 2008, 22:28:58 UTC

Aw, hehe! You're welcome! =)

hollieh8988 December 16 2008, 21:23:38 UTC

how dare you. :( *heartbreaking*

riversorrowdh December 16 2008, 22:07:43 UTC

i know! i know! haha thanks for reading! I promise fluff!