Fic: April (Chapter 12)

[brainzz_insanee]

So school has been a little hectic, but anyway <3

This is definitely my longest chapter yet, and hope it goes over as well as the others.

Title: April   
Author: Brainzz_Insanee
Pairing: David/Kelly(OC), David/Kimberly, eventual David/Michael
Status: 12/14
Word Count: 7053
Rating: R
Summary: David Cook has reached the feat everyone wants to achieve: He’s

Comments

[apathyxurgency]

Holy FUCKING shit.

David groans, “Okay… I epically fail.”
^"EPIC" ... <33333

He pulls the younger flush to his side and they’re almost too busy sneaking looks at each other to notice the screen door, snorting in a mix between a giggle and a snort when they just avoid hitting it.

“You’re so obnoxious.”

Michael scoffs at him, “And you’re a sweetie pie too. Thanks mate.”
^LMFAO. That is SO like them.

“Kiss me already, would you?”
^Demanding. I love it.

She pauses and tucks her hair back, “It’s about time you two got together.”
^XD I loved that.

“Freeze buster!” She exclaims, curling her fingers onto the tops of her thumbs and holding them eye level so she looks to be holding binoculars.

He grins the instant he sees the victory on her face, “Oh no! You got me!”
^I died at this part. She is SO cute and omg. Just the two of them together.<3

April abruptly goes to kiss the side of his face.
^SO ADORABLE. <3333

David grins and whispers by her ear, “Is it bad that I’m glad I can fool elderly women?”^LMAO OMG

[brainzz_insanee]

Omg SO MUCH YAY right now ♥
I love you, you're just so adorable!!!!
Your reviews rock the planet!

Lol, I wanted to make sure that I maintained their fun banter. I so had to use the word "epic" too! It's priceless, but must be used well :P

HEHE YUPPP APRIL
That cuteness never stops!!!! xD
The "freeze buster" had me laughing while I was writing it!

&& No frickin way!!! Your new favorite chapter??? I'm in total SQUEE
I'm grinning so much!!! You have no idea!

Woah yeah... that reminder just made me think for a minute. It's hard for me to believe that this story is ending... I've been working on it for so long... It's going to be so weird after I finish April. Thanks for reminding me, gosh... *hugs you* It's okay, I needed the reminder!

Yikes yeah... 2 chapters... anyway :)
*hugs you tight*
I ♥ you!

[apathyxurgency]

Awww I love you too bb!!! <3

Of course! The banter is one of my favorite things about this story.

For real! Omg she's too cute. I like really wish she was real. And his child. <3333

YES NEW FAVE!!! Believe it, girlll. <3!

XD Awwww I'm sorry I reminded you! I just don't know how I'm gonna handle this story ending! D:

*hugs back* ILY TOO!

[martinha_15]

WOW !

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL <3

[brainzz_insanee]

THANKS!!!! ♥

[tarattack]

THIS WAS SO AMAZING.
LIKE WHOA.

michael is breaking my heart though.
BUT THEY ARE TOGETHER FINALLY. YAY!

and david and brooke would make a hell of an attractive couple. :P

[brainzz_insanee]

OMG thank you!!!!!
I'm so WOAH happy xDDD

Yes, poor Michael had a flood of angst this chapter. He needed it.
I'm full of glee, I've been so anxious to get them together!

Lol, what an awesome comment and it's totally true!!! Him and Brooke would be super hot together.

[tarattack]

YAY!

its okay.
we love the angst. :]

i'm excited for the next chapter.
:DD

[sophieblack86]

This is so full of goodness I wouldnt even know where to start. I loved the part with david on michaels lap because the image is just sooo unbelievably squeeeeeee. And when David asks if hes really there *sigh* And when David is trying to get away at the begining. I loved all of it.
Its just so sweet and sad how David actually didnt know if Michael would want him back when hello? its so obvious. Poor David. But Im happy they are finally together.

And the last line is really leaving me wanting the next chapter.

[brainzz_insanee]

*squee dance*

Thank you so much, the review is lovely and I'm grinning so much right now! It's even better that you told exactly what you enjoyed, I appreciate that so much! The imagery of him on Michael's lap is something augh so hot! I needed to write it badly.

Thank you ♥

[sophieblack86]

Hot is definately the word for it. This fic totally is so responsible for my mind being in other places during my boring as hell physics class. :) Its okay- Im fine with that. I dont know if I can say this is my favorite chapter cuz there were others that I've thought that about before but this one might just win. Its was just so cute and fluffy but real and emotionally raw at the same time. I have no idea where this fic is going now but I cant wait to see. :)

[brainzz_insanee]

Hehe xDDD Thank you for letting your mind wander to this story during your physics class!!! :) We all have those classes in which we daze off in, I sure kept in mind a few of my favorite fics in my Chem class.

Thanks for enjoying the ride that is April xD and I'm excited that you're still excited to see what else happens in the story.

[matertenebrarum]

this really is just an absolutely beautiful story, i feel like i'm caught up in a whirlwind as I read it!

[brainzz_insanee]

Aw, thank you so much! I do apologize for getting back so late, but it's lj's fault. Their notification system was all wacky.

I really appreciate this review, thank you, Kara!!!!! ♥