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(Yesterday Until Never-Ending) Forever

Jul 20, 2015 22:00

Title: (Yesterday Until Never-Ending) Forever
Author: amaxingbaek
Beta: Anonymous
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s)/Focus: Baekhyun/Kyungsoo, Baekhyun/Joonmyun
Side Pairings: Untagged on purpose
Length: 47,876 words
Summary: Baekhyun always knew that the name of his soulmate would appear on his body one letter at a time. He doesn't understand how the whole thing works ( Read more... )

genre: romance, genre: soulmate, pairing: baekhyun/d.o., pairing: baekhyun/suho, genre: fluff, word count: 20-50k, year: 2015

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purplewhiskers July 20 2015, 20:30:08 UTC

this fic was just so smooth my fingers are like sliding over the keyboard as i'm typing this. just-it was a refreshing read, especially during this heat! better than my air conditioner, haha. but seriously, i loved baeksoo's relationship and the little hints at there being something more that kyungsoo is dealing with causing him to hold back. but despite that, he still tries to compromise w baekhyun and it was adorable. the way their feelings gradually grew stronger was just so well done. then junmyeon had to come in and smash through all the beautiful baeksoo ... but i can't hate him when he was adorable too.

that ending hurt! i wanted to read more because your writing and the fic overall was so good. congrats on finishing such a long piece. i can't wait to read more from this au <3 <3 <3

amaxingbaek July 25 2015, 03:17:59 UTC

Oh my gosh, I'm so happy that you liked it! I wasn't sure that people would read it since it isn't complete, so thank you for reading!! It's really gross and hot where I am, too, and I'm just blah in general. I'm also glad the pacing wasn't too long. About halfway through, I realized how boring this story could be, and that feeling only got worse the more I typed until I realized there was a whole lot more that I needed to flesh out that time wouldn't allow me to do. Please love Joonmyun haha. He's a cutie and I'm sad I had to cut it where I did since I gave him such the shortest end of the stick.

<3 <3 <3 I hope the next part doesn't disappoint ;; Thank you so much for your comment and for even bothering to click on the link in the first place!

purplewhiskers July 25 2015, 12:59:50 UTC

you're welcome! have more confidence in yourself because it's a really good fic <3 yeah this heat is killing me, haha. no it wasn't boring at all! i enjoyed the little details and the gradual build-up, it made when they actually got together v satisfying. we'll see if he's worthy in the next part ;)

i /know/ it won't ^^ aha, and you're very welcome. thank you for the lovely story <3

amaxingbaek July 28 2015, 06:16:06 UTC

You're very kind haha. I'm really glad it wasn't too long since it seemed like I was writing and writing and writing and the next thing I knew, it was almost 28k in and they were /just/ kissing haha. That's when I knew it was going to be a long road to the end and that I was a masochist for making things go so slowly. Well if you don't deem him worthy, I'll just keep him instead haha.

Eep /.\ Thank you again! I'm just sitting here with my face in my hands and smiling like a weirdo

lola_tenshi July 21 2015, 21:28:14 UTC

I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO UPSET TO REACH THE END OF A FIC BEFORE!!!!! D: (If it wasn't for the ending note about their being a second part, I'd be in even more agony ( ... )

amaxingbaek July 25 2015, 03:32:51 UTC

Eeeeeeee /clings to you ( ... )

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amaxingbaek July 25 2015, 03:41:59 UTC

Ireeeeeeeeeene <3 You're seriously the sweetest and I already told you this, but I was smiling so much when I was reading this comment.

Baekhyun is a bit of a tough one to crack when it comes to things he wants to happen that don't actually end up going the way he wants. Poor thing just had to get yelled at to get his head on straight.

baekxing \o/

And xiuhan \o/ haha. Don't worry, they'll keep coming back around. Luhan will make sure of it.

Excuse me but I misread it as CROTCHOMG ( ... )

naomi240000 July 25 2015, 01:48:12 UTC

When will you post part 2 because I love this fic so much! <333

amaxingbaek July 25 2015, 03:43:24 UTC

I wish I knew the answer to this ;____; It's definitely going to be a while since part two is going to be equally as long, if not longer, since there's a lot of things I need to flesh out and feelings that I need to get through. It's going to be a rollercoaster for sure.

I'm really glad you like it, though :) Thank you so much for reading!!