FIC: White Collar -- Contrite

[the_deep_magic]

Title: Contrite
Author: the_deep_magic
Pairing: Peter/Neal
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,796
Spoilers: 2x05 "Unfinished Business" and 2x06 "In the Red"
Warnings: blackmail, caning, voyeurism
Disclaimer: These characters don't belong to me, I just have fun playing with them.
Summary: Sara Ellis will drop the charges against Neal if Peter punishes him.  While she

Comments

[ziarenete13x]

Just (finally) got into this show thanks to the marathon running today. You have no idea how much 20 hours of this show has made me crave this. Serendipitously, I say this loaded on my flist. And my White Collar fic cherry is popped by caning? Unf! Thank you!

[the_deep_magic]

Heh heh heh. I just recently discovered it myself, and I'm (obviously) seriously loving the slash. So happy to be your first! ;o)

[deepbluemermaid]

...wow. That's not generally a kink of mine, but damn, you did it justice :)

[the_deep_magic]

Thank you!

[daria234]

This is excellent fun :) I love how sweet and concerned Peter is, how Neal seems to get Sara's desires better than peter does, and the hotness of it, and the conversation at the end too!

[the_deep_magic]

Thanks -- I meant it to be fun!

[non_timebo_mala]

I'll admit I didn't even know this was a kink of mine till I read it but, WOW! I just have to congratulate you on how well you kept them in character and true to how they would actually act - if put in this situation, obviously.

And, of course, IT WAS DAMN HOT! lol Great job! :D

[the_deep_magic]

Hee hee, I love introducing people to new kinks! Thanks for the kind words!

[bibliothekara]

O_o I think I may have to third the "Didn't know I had this kink until this story" chorus. And the best bit? Peter and Neal are in character the whole time. You skillfully walked the tightrope both of them were walking between anger at Sara and arousal at each other. Oh my.

(Also? I would totally read that story where Peter tells El what happened while she sits on his lap. Peter and El and safe-words are a) canon now, and b)a subject that should be explored more.)

[the_deep_magic]

Thanks so much! I'm still getting the characters down, so I'm really glad to hear it came across as believable!