"Waiting For A Happy Ending" [Code Geass] [LelouchShirley]

Jul 28, 2009 14:26

            There was a girl, sweet and innocent, who fell in love with a boy.

There was a boy, full of darkness and confliction, who couldn’t love the girl because he was too busy raging out against the world in a mask.

By the time the boy tried to love the girl, she was already gone.

It’s a sad, sad story ( Read more... )

lelouch/shirley, code geass

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ypaladinofchaos July 29 2009, 15:29:48 UTC
Thank you! It's been a while since I wrote any LelouchShirley, and the first I've written outside of a drabble format, so I was hoping to get it right.

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star_jinin July 29 2009, 03:58:07 UTC
OMG I adored this, and I think it sums Shirley and Lulu up perfectly :D Definately one of the the ShirLulu fic to end all ShirLulu fics! I'd be quoting lines and squealing about them, but then it would be ninety percent of the fic XD

I hope to see more!

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ypaladinofchaos July 29 2009, 15:30:56 UTC
*grins* Don't give me such great reviews all the time- I'm going to get a swelled head. But thank you for it all the same.

I'll probably be back with more in a few days, knowing me.

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misaoshiru July 29 2009, 04:41:52 UTC
It's not very nice of you to make a girl cry. ;_;

This was beautiful, though.

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ypaladinofchaos July 29 2009, 15:32:13 UTC
*pats, offers you a hankie* I was born to break hearts, what can I say? /joking

Glad you enjoyed it though!

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aetherae July 29 2009, 06:49:53 UTC
Oh, this was soso sad. Each and every line was beautiful, and I particularly loved this: ‘Breathe,’ he begs, because he can’t remember how. Just, oh Lelouch. ;;

But in any case, ♥ Amazing job on this!

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ypaladinofchaos July 29 2009, 15:33:04 UTC
Thank you! I got the idea in my head on Sunday and it just wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote it yesterday.

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ypaladinofchaos July 29 2009, 15:33:32 UTC
You're welcome, and thanks for the glowing review!

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