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31 Days Entry September 6th "Used to your streets"

Sep 06, 2007 00:24

Title: Extra Goodbyes
Day/Theme: September 6th/Used to your streets
Series: Bleach
Character/Pairing: Orihime
Rating: G

Orihime will never, ever tell, but, just before she left, she disobeyed Ulquiorra’s order and said goodbye to someone other than Kurosaki-kun.

“I know I’m not supposed to, but you deserved a goodbye as much as Kurosaki-kun ( Read more... )

31 days, bleach, orihime

Comments 7

evergrnterrace September 6 2007, 11:45:57 UTC

derrr...

It took me reading that about 10 times(or 3 in reality) to figure out who(what) in the hell she was saying goodbye to...

I swear I'm not mentally incapacitated.

evergrnterrace September 6 2007, 11:46:52 UTC

oohhhhh yeaaah!!!

This was awesome! (Leaves a little to be desired, but that's only cuz I'm in a serious epic mood tonight... It really was fantastic... Such a small amount of words to hold such a weight.)

falls_whisper September 6 2007, 15:29:04 UTC

I must be dumb... Who's she saying goodbye to? The only plausible person I can think of is her brother... :S

baby_werewolf September 6 2007, 18:40:08 UTC

The town, I think.

falls_whisper September 6 2007, 18:45:54 UTC

Ah yes, that actually makes a lot of sense. ^^; The name of the story and the ending kind of implies it strongly after all...

dawnduskdancer September 6 2007, 21:31:45 UTC

That's beautiful.

senbonzakura77 September 8 2007, 18:03:02 UTC

Cool! :D I've never really liked Orihime, but this was an intriguing piece. Glad that you gave the town a 'soul' of sorts-if swords can have them, why can't Karakura Town? ;)

Interesting story.