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the_castle

What Part of Forever (Chapter Five)

Feb 21, 2011 20:24

The final chapter, at long last. I cannot actually believe how long this has taken, and how late this story is, but I just couldn’t bring myself to post until I was satisfied with the outcome. So, all the way from Auckland, New Zealand, despite being viciously ill and in a foreign country, ENJOY. Thanks to everyone for reading, and for everyone who ( Read more... )

st au, st: reboot, spock, kirk/spock, kirk, what part of forever

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rae1013 February 21 2011, 21:48:53 UTC

Oh my god! I kinda hate you right now. (Which in no way dims my undying love, just sorta compliments it.) But I've been waiting forever and ever for this, in some circles a year + some does constitute forever, and you go and post it when my shuttlecraft is in for repairs!!! I don't even. Seriously, my baby is so infected it's breeding virus' like tribbles. And now I have to read this masterpiece sitting up after abdominal surgery. I'll do it. Don't get me wrong. Just. Gah!

Hate? It. Is. Strong.

Detailed review will actually follow my mini-breakdown. I promise so much feedback you'll need glasses after reading it all. For reals.

*lovesyouforpostingbutyourtimingsuuuuuuuuucccccccksss*

feels_like_fire February 24 2011, 05:26:52 UTC

AUGH OH NO! Well I hope that the story is worth it, and that you get better quickly!! And oh, my, I can't wait to see your feedback, I'm an absolute glutton for the stuff. :D

HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER DARLING! MMMMMWUAH!

dreamwind83 February 22 2011, 04:58:20 UTC

Just to let you know your link here to part 4 isn't working. Otherwise I am absolutely loving this fic. I can't wait to finish reading all of it.

feels_like_fire February 24 2011, 05:25:54 UTC

Whoooops! thanks for the heads-up, bb, I'll fix it right away! ♥ Glad you like it!!

rae1013 March 2 2011, 02:57:06 UTC

OMG! HE DID GO TO JIM! *JUMPS UP AND DOWN* THIS IS A BIG DEAL. IT'S NOT LOGICAL. GO SPOCK! /end allcaps

"Do you complicate me, you mean?" Jim nodded. He seemed to be holding his breath. Spock smiled, ever so slightly, the barest quirk of his lips. "Irredeemably. I came here to ask if you would continue to complicate me, as I do not wish to live without it. Or without you."

*melts*

"Please clarify your answer, Jim," he murmured, stroking the pad of his thumb against Jim's cheekbone. "Your response is indistinct."

"Shut the fuck up, Spock." Jim's grin was blinding, barely visible out of the corner of Spock's eyes. "I want to keep complicating you," he said, the slightest shake in his words. "Now will you stop asking stupid questions?"

God I love how you write these two!

As if on cue, Spock entered the room from the opposite doorway. He went immediately to Jim, indulging in a spine-tingling kiss against the counter before he pulled back. "Why are you wearing that sweatshirt?" he asked. "And where is Captain Pike?"So domestic I ( ... )

feels_like_fire March 5 2011, 06:01:24 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHA YOUR COMMENTS ARE THE FREAKING BEST, LADY. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoy this story, I worked really, REALLY freaking hard on it. Domestic!Kirk and Spock are a bonus; I wasn't sure it'd appear in the story until I was actually working on this chapter, and then boom. But Winona and Scotty, I've had planned since before I put one word down, so haha, I'm glad to finally be able to reveal it, I've been DYING sitting on it.

And yeah, Tarsus. This was the best way to deal with it, I felt, particularly since this canon (and this Jim, and even REboot!Jim) was very different from TOS!Jim and so I felt the Tarsus situation should reflect that.

Thanks for reading, doll! *Smooch*

sinisterf September 7 2011, 21:52:01 UTC

This? Was more than amazing. I loved every moment again. When I am able, I'll come back with more coherent feedback. In the meantime, can I just say <3<3<3?