What Part of Forever: Chapter One

[the_castle]

Title: What Part of Forever (Chapter 1)
Author & Mixer: Kairi (feels_like_fire) Did my own mix for this, which you can find here.
Artist: kauniainen did a beautiful piece of artwork that you can see HERE, I will make sure she sees all of your comments!
Betas: This fic would not EXIST if it were not for the efforts of tmysha, rainjewel, and linzeestyle. I CAN NEVER THANK YOU ENOUGH.
Series: AOS/

Comments

Epic Feedback Part 1

[rae1013]

You set up the Jim & Bones relationship perfectly. We know already that Jim doesn't value himself as he should and that McCoy is the one who tends to him and tries to knock sense into his fool head. This is a solid foundation for who they are independently and together