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Harleen Part 18/?

Jan 30, 2012 16:32

Author: BlueSuede
Title: Harleen
Rating: NC17
Genre: Friendship/Romance
Pairings: Chloe/Bruce
Summary: Chloe is on a recruiting mission, trying to pin down Gotham's infamous Dark Knight. In order to learn more about him, she begins interviewing those he's captured. What will she do when the Joker escapes and begins targeting her?
Warning: sexually ( Read more... )

multichapter, smallville, pair: chruce, fanfiction, crossover, batman, fic: harleen

Comments 4

kitmerlot1213 January 30 2012, 23:32:54 UTC

I'm so glad that you are continuing this excellent fic!

I like that Bruce is so worried and protective of Chloe but it is her choice if she wants to be with him--I just hope he realizes that sooner rather then later.

And good for Chloe for testifying so bravely and not letting the Joker get to her.

Continued wonderful work on this story :)

lionhearted_21 February 6 2012, 22:13:38 UTC

I feel a little bad for Chloe, there she is trying to prove that the Joker is evil incarnate and it seems like no one in the audience is willing to consider that a conniving person can make themselves seem crazy just to get away with crime. After everything Chloe went through that realization has got to hurt.

I really enjoyed the peek into Bruce's head and how he was there in the audience. Little things that show how much he cares and is conflicted about his feelings and choices.

Can't wait to see how the trial progresses!

sarcastic_fina June 22 2012, 00:29:31 UTC

I lay my complete and devoted adoration at your blue suede shoes! This was fantastic! I loved the insight into Bruce and his inner argument. He can be so selfless and self deprecating at the same time. I love Oliver looking out for her and wondering if he should just send Lois in, which would be hilarious and awesome. I love the boys worrying and watching out for her. And I just adored Chloe going toe to toe with the lawyer instead of being treated inferior! Fantastic read so far, I can't wait to read more!

the_bluesuede June 26 2012, 22:04:42 UTC

ugh! Thank you so much for your praise! It's always lovely to hear from other writers that I follow. (I love your work.) Also, you've freshly motivated me to dig out the half-finished next chapter I have. yay :D

Thanks for the tip about the broken links, btw. I will have to go in and fix those! Much love!