Of Swashbuckling Pirates and Distressing Damsels--5/6

Apr 25, 2011 12:32

Title: Of Swashbuckling Pirates and Distressing Damsels
Category: Smallville/Pirates of the Caribbean Crossover
Rating: R
Genre: Crossover--adventure/romance
Pairing: Chloe/Oliver
Warnings:  violence, some adult content
Summary: Chloe Sullivan is captured by pirates.  Do you need anything else?

Prompt: ari_g a crossover with Pirates of the Caribbean

I know, I ( Read more... )

fic: swashbuckling, multichapter, pirates of the caribbean, smallville, fanfiction, pair: chlollie, crossover

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greenteam4ever April 25 2011, 13:40:40 UTC
Oh, I totally liked it! And I think it's great that we'll have one more chapter of this wonderful story! The scene in Ollie's room was awesome, really. Oliver should be more confident, yes, he should go and kidnap her, again!
I like your writing `cause it's like watching a movie, I can almost see everything what happens in the story.
And that, that was great:
"Like what?" she repeated incredulously. How about like "Chloe, don't go," "Chloe I need you, stay with me," "Chloe, I love you!" she raged internally. !!
Thank you so much, can't wait for the last chapter!

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flyswithnowings April 25 2011, 14:54:07 UTC
Yay, we get another chapter!

This whole chapter I was thinking: Ollie, stop being an ignorant ass and just tell her.
But he didn't so...*sigh*

I would totally love if Chloe ended up kidnapping him, just saying. ;)
Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one!

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thegrin April 25 2011, 15:14:55 UTC
I'm so happy that you wrote one more chapter because I love this story !
I really wanted Oliver to stop before she left and Chloe to just tell him her feelings ... gahhh they are so stubborn !!
Great job on this chapter, I can't wait to read more :)

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phoenix_173 April 25 2011, 20:04:01 UTC
You know...that's just mean. Leading us on, then stopping right when it's getting good... But you are totally forgiven since it was such an awesome chapter. :D I hope you have the next part planned/written so we don't have to wait too long.

=D

Galen

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purple_moon123 April 25 2011, 21:48:00 UTC
SO I suck because I haven't commented from the beginning... because I love this story and I anxiously await for a new chapter!!!! I love crossovers and the banner is freaking gorgeous!!!

Also Love that whenever you post it's 3/4, 4/5 and now it's 5/6 if this continues I can tell you I will not mind!!! XD

And ZOMG that was freaking hot!!!

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