[2010 Resolution] - Drabble 23

Nov 20, 2010 18:02

Date: 20 November 2010
Promt: "I am usually better when I lie ( Read more... )

already over, 2010 resolution drabble, ben 10, tetrax, six-six

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taedenitespiral November 21 2010, 03:36:44 UTC
OMG. He totally snatched the knife! That sneaky, sneaky bounty hunter!

I loved that you included mention of Seven Seven's yammering. As a side note, I love that Seven Seven is the name of a drink. It makes me LOL.

Back from my trip on the tangent train.

The AO Drabbles you do are always short and sweet, with a little knife twist and stab that gets your attention in a good way.

I'm always kind of left wondering where you are going to go with them.

I like that you always make Six Six an underhanded bounty hunter. He knows what he is doing, even better that his true intentions remain obscured to the rest of the characters.

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the_audren_file November 21 2010, 10:04:51 UTC
8DDDDD I am so glad that you thought the knife-snatching was sneaky. I was worrying that in the act of mentioning its existence, the end of the drabble would be predictable.

Seven Seven is the name of a drink!? I only know of 7Up :o You learn something new every day! XDDDD

XDDDD I can't take full credit for this particular drabble's "twist" ending. I was basically whining to the BF how I had no clue how to end this confrontation between them and he suggests turning Six-Six into a prisoner and having him snatch the knife while pissing Tetrax off as a distraction.

Then I go "But wouldn't he notice the missing knife?!"

Then he goes "It's that tiny knife Van Damme had in that SF movie" (that we saw last Tuesday LOL).

And then I promptly ended up rewriting most of the drabble to accommodate the change XDDDDD I'm happy with the way it turned out and I'm happier that you like it :3 Your comments always make me feel happy and warm in the heartplace, like I accomplished something grand and spectacular. Thank you <333 ( ... )

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taedenitespiral November 21 2010, 13:04:13 UTC
Well, 7 Up is part of it XD
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seagram%27s_7_and_7-UP
Okay, granted its proper title is 7 and 7, but no one says that, they say Seven Seven XD

Loved ones provide such good inspiration, sometimes. I have found this to be true, also.

LOL, Street Fighter movie reference...ON TUESDAY! HAW!

I'm glad my interweb comments make you warm and fuzzy in your heartplace. <3. Yours always make me super smiley, too. You're awesome like that.

Six-Six does seem more tactical and weapons oriented because of his canonical augementation and use of installed technology while Tetrax is literally built for tougher combat.

I love that we can have these conversations. <3.

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