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Fic: Forest Fracas [PG]

Nov 11, 2010 22:28

Author: jezzifishie
Title: Forest Fracas
Pairing(s): Albus Severus/Scorpius, Harry/Ginny, mention of James/Teddy
Rating: PG
Warnings: Highlight to read: [Werewolf!Al], some mild violence
Word Count: 6,278
Summary: One mistake changes Al's life forever.
Prompt: #20 (Submitted by mabonwitch)
Notes: Thank you to my lovely Gryffindor friend for giving me a kick up the ( Read more... )

*fic, words: 5000-10000, rating: pg, fest: 2010 prompt fest

Comments 8

mabonwitch November 12 2010, 06:13:13 UTC

AH! I love you! Oh, this is perfect, exactly what I was hoping for with this prompt. So cute. Shy, bookish Scorpius is the perfect foil for boisterous Albus. And I loved that flash of Teddy/James, caught by Al in a woozy moment.

jezzifishie December 9 2010, 21:37:09 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :)

tigersilver November 14 2010, 02:40:42 UTC

It's so well told, this sorry tale of accident and ramification, all from Al's perspective. I love the simplicity of it and the emphasis on the raw courage children so often demonstrate--as well as their thoughtless cruelty (the reprehensible actions of his schoolmates. The relationship between Al and Scorpius was adorabe, and having Draco save the day as deus ex machina (*and* his comments about Harry! Meeeooww!) was marvellously well done.
Excellent!

jezzifishie December 9 2010, 21:37:23 UTC

Aww, thanks very much! :)

suzyblack November 14 2010, 10:46:53 UTC

Oh this was so lovely XD I adored the boys and the story was really amazing XD

Really well done!!

jezzifishie December 9 2010, 21:37:34 UTC

Thank you! :D

dirty_darella December 5 2010, 01:25:01 UTC

This story was great! I loved the contrast of Al and Scorpius' characters. I just wanted to huggle both of them. *squishes*

jezzifishie December 9 2010, 21:38:03 UTC

Lol, I feel that way most of the time when reading AS/S! I want to snuggle them both to my bosom ;)

Thanks very much :D