FIC: Hide [R]

Nov 09, 2010 19:53

Author: creepylicious
Title: Hide
Pairing(s):Albus/Scorpius, Albus/OFC
Rating: R
Warnings: sex, violence (nothing graphic)
Word Count: 3,863
Summary: A hand brushes against someone else's in a crowd, an everyday occurrence. Something most people forget as soon as it happens, but Albus is not anyone and one brush of a stranger's skin against his changes ( Read more... )

*fic, words: 1000-5000, fest: 2010 prompt fest, rating: r

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creepylicious December 6 2010, 11:13:46 UTC
Thank you!
His Hogwarts days were lonely. I'm a horrible person...

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lilyginny27 November 9 2010, 23:37:18 UTC
Wow. Very beautifully heartwrenching. Well done.

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creepylicious December 6 2010, 11:13:58 UTC
Thank you so much!

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tigersilver November 10 2010, 00:53:54 UTC
Fascinating! I don't believe I blinked once, in all that! And excellent, as well. Very well thought out, original and romantic as all Hell. Thank you!

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creepylicious December 6 2010, 11:16:11 UTC
Thank you.
To be honest I didn't think it was romantic at all when I wrote it, but I guess it really is.

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creepylicious December 6 2010, 11:20:45 UTC
I'm kind of really happy about this comment, I love when people are thinking about what they read.
I admit it isn't an easy situation knowing that the feelings you have maybe aren't all yours and of course it's not okay to make a child spend his whole school years alone. I just think that not everything is good in their world even after the Dark Lord. So that's me trying to show something else. It's a new kind of racism, I guess.

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creepylicious December 6 2010, 23:53:03 UTC
I know that feeling, it makes me want to read them a few times until I can pin my feelings down. Strangely enough it sometimes happens with my own stuff as well.
I would like to read more about this possibility or write about it actually. How children of former Death Eaters are treated and what they have to deal with. How no one wants to be labeled a pure blood anymore, maybe. In hindsight I think I was maybe too soft on the society view here.
Thank you for indulging me while I'm rambling away.

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ykraiina November 10 2010, 01:27:29 UTC
I love it.

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creepylicious December 6 2010, 11:20:54 UTC
Thank you!

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