FIC: Pinning A Butterfly [NC-17]

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Author: obscureauthor
Title: Pinning a butterfly
Characters/Pairings: Albus Severus/ Scorpius
Rating: NC 17
Warnings: swearing, drug and self abuse
Word Count: 4159
Prompt: Al has a charmed life, a family who loves him, money, popularity, he even gets along brilliantly with his siblings. Then he meets Scorpius, whose father lost his family fortune sometime

Comments

[ura_hd]

I like this story a lot. It was very interesting to read. I liked the boys. I hope that Al will help Scor overcome his bad habits. I would love to read a sequel about their year at Hogwarts.

P.S. In several places you wrote "thing" instead of "think".

[obscureauthor]

Thank you for the comment
I noticed the mistakes later but could unfortunately not change it
{I did however make them when i re-posted it to my journal}
am glad you liked the story
and I shall certainly consider a sequel!
:)

[hpfangirl71]

I like the premise of this story... of one of the boys being so broken and the other trying hard to fix him because he loves him. I love those types of stories... the characters are believable and heart wrenching, would love to see more of this!! :D

[obscureauthor]

Thank you for commenting on this fic
its very hurt/comfort fic
I particularly enjoy that genre as well
I would love to write more along these lines of course

[brighterlove]

This was crazy and messy and a little destructive, sort of like love, Al was a blind idiot and Scor is all screwed up and not dealing. This needs a sequel

[obscureauthor]

Thank you for commenting
I particularly like the whole spiraling-out-of-control love
I shall definitely be considering a sequel