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FIC: the rest of your nights with the lights on [R] - Part 2

Nov 23, 2011 22:04

( the rest of your nights with the lights on - part 2 )

*fic, fest: 2011 prompt fest, words: 10k+, rating: r

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mentalistecbm December 12 2011, 04:10:34 UTC

you say detailed, i say complicated and stress-inducing, but, you know. same thing. thanks!

imprintofadream November 24 2011, 00:16:48 UTC

oh. this. I mean.

I love the characters here, just because. well. Albus could be one-dimensional, but he really really is not, at all. so many emotions and ideas and thoughts and guilt, anger, fear, despite his attempts at aloofness. he's fucked up, yes, but. but he's human. and I think that's what I loved most about this, that you let us see humanity as it is sometimes. and. well. uh. yeah.

thank you for writing this, it was. well.

mentalistecbm December 12 2011, 04:12:38 UTC

albus is an example of why so many ~humans are assholes. i will never quit with this argument.

no, thank you.

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mentalistecbm December 12 2011, 04:13:42 UTC

ha, thank you! well, i mean, there wasn't actually any infidelity...? it was just albus being, uh, albus.

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mentalistecbm December 12 2011, 04:17:31 UTC

i'm sorry to make you cry, love, but i'm not sorry that this actually affected you, not gonna lie.

bless you for seeing that albus is a total shit and hating him, oh my gosh, i'm terribly happy that you hate him but get it cause he's not a good person at all, and he's not very redeemable but like--i don't know. he's terribly insensitive and flawed, so very, very flawed and there are so, so many things wrong with all of him, except. there's a lot of 'but' and 'except' with this guy, i'm telling you.

oh, his mouth, indeed.

thank you, babe.

ura_hd November 24 2011, 05:41:08 UTC

This story sucked me in. I was rooting for N12 to stay untouched and got my wish:) I love all the characters. Albus is a bit less sympathetic, but loved being in his head all the same. In short, this is a great story. But it feels a bit unfinished somehow.

mentalistecbm December 12 2011, 04:19:59 UTC

something so complicated will never ~finish, silly.

all jokes aside, i think it's because you know that there's more to it. they still have to actually talk it out, they still have to figure out some freaking way to work out albus' their problems and i think that'll be an ongoing process, yeah?

thanks for reading and commenting.