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Fic: The Broken Key (3/4)

Jan 09, 2011 15:30

Title: The Broken Key (3/4)
Author: shinyopals
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Rose/Ten II
Summary: Trapped and imprisoned, with no hope of rescue from Torchwood, the Doctor and Rose are forced to go to desperate lengths to save each other and the universe from a deadly enemy who's been watching them for a long time.
Author's notes: Thanks to ginamak for beta reading and ( Read more... )

present day earth setting, series 1

Comments 19

shinkonokokoro January 9 2011, 23:45:49 UTC

Nuuuuuuuuuuu!!!! I want more! I want more quickly! (I am a product of my culture!) More more more! Lol--I love the way you've written everyone and the way everything's come together! I can't wait to see what Rose, Jed, and Isabella/Anna cook up. It'll be entertaining, I'm sure!

shinyopals January 10 2011, 13:51:05 UTC

Hee, thanks! The final chapter will be up.soon - probably tomorrow. :D

beachy_geek January 10 2011, 03:12:09 UTC

Aaargh! I'm all clenched up now! Although I shouldn't worry, because you wouldn't let anything bad happen, right? Right?

shinyopals January 10 2011, 13:52:20 UTC

XD Probably not, although it depends.on your definition of 'bad'!

quickyfant January 10 2011, 05:24:53 UTC

Gahhh evil cliffhanger is EVIL! ;) This is really good, I love the Master, and I just love him telling the Doctor he is wrong, I love the Doctor, but LOL Ten I will enjoy the fact that you were told that you are wrong! :D :D But even after being called this by a converted human to Master, Doctor you are douche to Jack! I love it! >:)

It makes me sad that crazy!Ten never had the chance to make six billion copies of himself, there could be a universe with a Master!copy and a crazy!Ten!copy. >:D

shinyopals January 10 2011, 13:55:06 UTC

The Doctor is always a douche to.Jack - some things don't change! XD And writing the Master freaking out is always fun!
Thanks! :D

spellweaver731 January 10 2011, 23:16:28 UTC

Not fair! Need moar now! I love this so very much, there is such building excitement and anticipation in each chapter. I love Rose in this, how she is thinking things through and how completely the Master is underestimating her.

shinyopals January 11 2011, 17:53:04 UTC

Hee, thank you! :D I'm glad you're enjoying. And Rose being awesome is something I always like writing.

If I get on and post, next chapter will be up tonight!

captaintish January 13 2011, 18:27:39 UTC

LOL -- the Doctor being human : "That's disgusting!!"

Aww, only one more chapter. SADNESS. OKay, I'm gonna go wash my hair before I read it. :D

shinyopals January 13 2011, 19:04:27 UTC

XD Well for a Time Lord it is pretty awful!

Thank you! :D And enjoy the last!