Lost Fic: Juliet & Kate: Fire in her eyes: Chapter 5

May 25, 2010 01:56


Title: Fire in her eyes
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juliet, lost, juliate, fanfic, kate

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nonsenseandmaya May 24 2010, 19:25:31 UTC
Oooh, I like it. Update soon? ;)

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carlyisnot May 25 2010, 17:22:01 UTC
thanks for reading, so glad you like it :) Will definitely update soon, stay tuned

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bellataggart May 24 2010, 22:34:28 UTC
Yay! Thanks for my fix.
Great as usual. Beautifully developing. And now we have glimpses into the week, memories surfacing. And so confusing for poor Kate. I like that Juliet doesnt back down from Kate. They both push and push, and challange eachother in a way that will eventually be good for them.
And then they have their aww worhty moments. like, And then suddenly Juliet pauses, softens her tone “Please, just keep your mouth shut and stay out of trouble.” Very aww, indeed.

Also, this
"Kate knows she has to push this aside, push all of this madness aside and just leave. But somehow, as if she was shackled to Juliet, she just can’t bring herself to do what she does best, run." was a great way to communicate how Kate is feeling.

Loving this fic and looking forward to moreeee...

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carlyisnot May 25 2010, 17:40:34 UTC
Thank you once again for the beautiful comments to our fic :) I really enjoy hearing about the parts you like most. Hope you will continue to enjoy it :) Kassandra and I are pretty pleased with it so far, and I think we're terrified of messing up the ending! I also love the way Juliet doesn't back down, i love her strength but i too love those gentle moments also. Such an amazing character to work with.

Thank you so much for sticking with the story :)

xoxox

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xixlovexgreenx May 25 2010, 18:36:58 UTC
Yay, there's more!
Again, loved this piece. I never really can manage to get into Kate's mind, but this seems to be just quite accurate. *nods* She is just so confused. It seems right. But I still feel so very sorry for Juliet, too. She remembers everything and can't bring herself to tell Kate to protect which is just so sad. But it's impressive Kate still manages to read Juliet just as well as she does. Like.... Juliet betrays no emotion whatsoever and yet Kate just KNOWS. I love that.

But now I ache for some bonding time... but you know me. I always want bonding time. xD

MOAR!^^

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