PROMPTED COMMENTFIC PORN MEME THING

[the_tenzo]

Ohnoez, she's having one of her hair-brained ideas again!

So, in brief, here is the story: I just found today (at work, no less!) a free-for-the-taking vintage edition of The Joy of Sex. There is no end to how amused I am by this. And, honest-to-goodness my first thought was, "How can I use this for ficcing purposes?"

Well, the answer is right here.

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[hazelwho]

His voice cuts through the fog and she looks down at him. His eyes blaze up at her, dark and deep, and a predatory grin spreads across his lips. Then he lowers his mouth to cover her swollen nub and the tip of the toy teasing it. The sensation of his warm wet mouth on her along with the buzzing is like nothing she has ever known, and then he adds gentle suction to his torture. Rose shouts and bucks her hips. He follows her movements, not allowing her to escape the sensation. When her hips slam back down to the bed, he thrusts two fingers deep inside her and curls them. Rose keens, and then comes in hard pulsing waves. Every muscle in her body tightens and thrums in time with the clenching. When the shaking fades, he releases her clit, lifts the vibrator off it, and eases his fingers out of her body. She shudders violently as he drags his tongue up her sex one last time before laying down beside her. When she opens her eyes to look over at him, he is wearing his smug grin. She gives him her tongue-touched smile in return and leans over

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[morrighangw]

OMG GUH. This was AMAZINGLY hot.

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[hazelwho]

Thank you so much!! This is the first fic I've ever posted, and I am unbelievably nervous about it. Don't ask me why I decided to jump into the deep end of the pool and attempt smut, I honestly have no idea what possessed me. So getting a "GUH" has just made my day. =)

PS, love your icon!

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[morrighangw]

Oh, I totally know what you mean. The little ficlet I posted for this meme was my first Who fic. ^^

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[tardismate]

This is the first fic I've ever posted,

Dear God In Heaven woman, why? You are quite possibly the most talented smut writer I have ever read. *relinquishes smut queen's crown*

That was just pure brilliance...well, yes, it definitely was.

GUH. GUH I say!

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[hazelwho]

I'm laughing out loud at the notion that I have any kind of talent, especially given the intimidatingly awesome group of people here, but I'll take the compliment. Thank you, really. It means a lot coming from someone who has several stories on my rainy day reread list.

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[rowofstars]

This is the first fic I've ever posted

Well by all means POST AWAY!! :) Seriously, if this is your first I might be dead from *guh* overload by the fifth!

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[hazelwho]

Well by all means POST AWAY!! :)

Thank you! I can't believe all the positive feedback and support I've gotten here. I'm glad you liked it!

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[rowofstars]

*blinks* Oh sorry! I was having a bit of a staring contest with your icon...

This is why I love things like this. It brings out people who might not post/write otherwise, like the many hidden diamonds in our fandom.

*goes back to staring at the sexy*

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[hazelwho]

Yeah, that icon is great. It's one of justlook3's.

It brings out people who might not post/write otherwise
Agreed! I think there's something about this kind of set up that makes you think, aw, what the hell, I'll try that. The fandom owes the-tenzo a cookie. =)

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[beatlejessie]

Ok, I am seconding the *GUH*

This was gorgeous and OH so hot. Excellent!! I think this challenge is bringing out all sorts of us who are lurking-fic writers :) but it is such fun!!

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[hazelwho]

Thank you! *blushes*

I have to agree about this challenge being special. The sheer awesomeness of the set-up and prompts not only got me to delurk, but made me write and post Who!porn. I still can't believe I really did it. It's been so much fun to read what everyone else wrote, and my story was certainly fun to write, so I'm glad I participated. =)

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[doctorsdiva]

Brilliant. hot, playful, loving, everything a good smut fic should be. Well done you on this first of many I hope. I'll definitely be looking out for more. *divahugs*

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[hazelwho]

hot, playful, loving, everything a good smut fic should be.
*blushes*
Thank you! That means so much coming from you, Mother Superior. ;)

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[quean_of_swords]

"This could be a little more sonic" will never not be funny.

Hot.

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[hazelwho]

Thank you! And I totally agree with this -
"This could be a little more sonic" will never not be funny.