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the_tenzo

PROMPTED COMMENTFIC PORN MEME THING

Jul 28, 2009 14:26

Ohnoez, she's having one of her hair-brained ideas again!

So, in brief, here is the story: I just found today (at work, no less!) a free-for-the-taking vintage edition of The Joy of Sex. There is no end to how amused I am by this. And, honest-to-goodness my first thought was, "How can I use this for ficcing purposes?"

Well, the answer is right here.

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genre: smut, !commentfic meme

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Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 28 2009, 20:14:37 UTC

He shifted her to sit on his lap, and as she settled against him he aligned himself with her. He thought he might explode right then when she sank down on him, her muscles not having stilled yet.

“Fuck me, Doctor,” she whispered, burying her fingers in his hair, digging her fingers into the flesh of his back.

“Oh yes,” he said. He rolled them over, and, hooking one arm around her leg, slid even deeper into her.

Their joined moan drowned out the crickets and the gentle whisper of the breeze in willow-tree's foliage.

“Please, Doctor, don't... wait, please, fuck me,” Rose whimpered, drawing him down to her for a kiss.

He set a rather powerful rhythm, and after a few long strokes he felt the world go white around him as he came, crying out her name. Her muscles clenched around him as she tumbled over the edge with him, her moan a distant sound through the rushing in his ears.

Re: Part 2 the_tenzo July 28 2009, 21:02:57 UTC

Oh, well done! I really like your description of the scene (for some reason I'm picturing sort of an old abandoned house with an overgrown garden that he's found, and that is terribly terribly romantic!).

I'm not sure if this book is as common in Germany, but it is *so* 70's-hilariously so with some of the sort of free-wheeling sexual mores.

Re: Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:08:36 UTC

for some reason I'm picturing sort of an old abandoned house with an overgrown garden that he's found

That's probably because I've set it in the house Rose inherits in Silver Leaves. This is one of the earliest scenes I've created for the story, and I decided to write it down last night, in response to the meme.

I'm not sure the book is Common in Germany either, but I've heard so much about it, I think I can't tell for sure.

Re: Part 2 tardismate July 28 2009, 21:44:07 UTC

Oh God, that is just BEAUTIFUL smut!!!

Re: Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:09:15 UTC

And this from the lips of the queen of smut. *bows* Thanks.

Re: Part 2 catyuy July 28 2009, 22:15:57 UTC

Love it.

Re: Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:09:31 UTC

Ta.

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Re: Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:10:06 UTC

But you're well enough now, I trust? *fans you a little*

Re: Part 2 morrighangw July 29 2009, 01:28:02 UTC

Just...GUH.

Re: Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:11:27 UTC

Heh.

Re: Part 2 plaid_slytherin July 29 2009, 04:15:09 UTC

Oh, wow. That is just so... yum. The setting is gorgeous and the smut is so hot. Lovely job.

Re: Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:11:43 UTC

Thanks.

Re: Part 2 editrx July 29 2009, 07:35:18 UTC

Beautiful piece; outdoor sex is something that's always been a bit of a kink for me, ever since my first boyfriend used to, ahem, take me for picnics every Sunday afternoon. ::blushes::

Re: Part 2 wildwinterwitch July 29 2009, 13:12:28 UTC

That sounds lovely... only, my piece took place in a conservatory.

Re: Part 2 editrx July 29 2009, 20:33:53 UTC

Welllll, plants, conservatory -- it hit a memory with me as it was. :)

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