FILL: Skin on Skin part 2 of ?
anonymous
December 5 2011, 02:33:10 UTC
"Hi," Marcus says, extending his hand towards Esca like he is still that stupid, jumped up school boy he once was, meeting a contact in the junior investors group
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Re: FILL: Skin on Skin part 6 of ?awarringtonDecember 7 2011, 22:23:41 UTC
Good grief, my ovaries are on the verge of exploding!
I love all the tension between them, Esca all snarky and mischievous and Marcus wary but easy-going. I love their immediate mutual attraction, how they want each other so much. And the games they're playing with each other, too.
I can't believe no-one's commented on the size of Marcus' dick yet! I love that his ginormous and that Esca loves it. :) The hotness aside, Marcus' back-story is sad and I'm really enjoying their characterisations in this.
FILL: Skin on Skin part 7 of ?
anonymous
December 8 2011, 21:37:22 UTC
Marcus is not inclined to comply, wants in the name of all that's sane to withdraw at once, but instead, trusting that as it's Esca's body getting it, he knows best how to do it, he thrusts cock into him hard and deep
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FILL: Skin on Skin part 8 of ?
anonymous
December 11 2011, 01:34:33 UTC
Thank you for the comments guiz I appreciate them dearly. Glad you appreciate the incessant drawn out filth of it so far. I am now somehow writing some more non porny story for these two. Although there may be a wee bit more porn to come first..."Yeah?" Marcus says in a huff
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Re: FILL: Skin on Skin part 8 of ?awarringtonDecember 11 2011, 20:46:02 UTC
One of the things that struck me about this is how much they talk to each other, which has the effect of really connecting me to the action - which is hotter than a hot thing. You managed to pull me into this so deeply with all the visceral descriptions that when Robin spoke to them to give Esca direction, it was a jolt!
Esca walking off without a word doesn't bode well. Looking forward to the next update. ♥
FILL: Skin on Skin part 9 of ?
anonymous
December 13 2011, 23:27:03 UTC
I love your comments, thank you, they are kinder than this rampant filth deserves. I hope this part works.Esca's vacation tugs at Marcus, causes a hollow spot of abandonment in his chest. He feels a great urge to get up and follow him but instead stays still on the bed feeling foolish
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FILL: Skin on Skin part 10 of ?
anonymous
December 14 2011, 00:37:40 UTC
Outside the open door of the bathroom the shower is as loud as a waterfall. Marcus enters quick before self consciousness has the opportunity to mount up within him. The frosted glass cubicle faces the door. Esca, inside it, sees him immediately, and slides the door almost all the way open, peering around it, to say with a cheerful grin
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I love all the tension between them, Esca all snarky and mischievous and Marcus wary but easy-going. I love their immediate mutual attraction, how they want each other so much. And the games they're playing with each other, too.
I can't believe no-one's commented on the size of Marcus' dick yet! I love that his ginormous and that Esca loves it. :) The hotness aside, Marcus' back-story is sad and I'm really enjoying their characterisations in this.
Thank you for sharing. ♥
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He's not the only one who's fucking close. JFC this is so intense and hot. Guh.
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Always happy to make you laugh, bb ♥
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I love how the two of them have an immediate connection (pun half intended) and how cute Esca is being and how much Marcus wants it.
Loving the narrative and the sex, OMFG... !!
Thanks for this lovely update. ♥
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I cannot deal with how insanely hot and how insanely awesome this is. hnnnngh.
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Esca walking off without a word doesn't bode well. Looking forward to the next update. ♥
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