Esca/Placidus
anonymous
February 22 2011, 10:53:37 UTC
(Possibly more of a book-verse prompt? Sad anon has yet to see the movie. :( But if it can fit into the movie-verse, by all means!)
Hatesex. It needs to happen between these two, somehow. Please make it happen. (If you want to work jealous!Marcus in there somewhere, I sure as hell won't stop you!)
Fill: Rubicon, (1/4)xahra99March 3 2011, 10:16:06 UTC
A:N. This turned out much, much darker than I had originally planned, so apologies if you had something else in mind. Watch me work over my deeply ambiguous felings about this fic over at my livejournal at http://xahra99.livejournal.com/35469.html#cutid1 in the essay 'Crossing the Rubicon, or How I Made my Beta Reader Question Both my Morals and my Sanity
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Re: Fill: Rubicon, (2/4)xahra99March 3 2011, 10:17:03 UTC
Placidus smiles, withdraws his hand and hits Esca very precisely across the face. The blow knocks the Briton a step backwards. He does not fall, although his body twists to absorb the blow. He raises his hand to his lip and touches wetness
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Re: Fill: Rubicon, (3/4)xahra99March 3 2011, 10:17:53 UTC
There's a cart at the end of the alley, tilted with its tail in the air and the shafts digging into the mud. They drag Esca up and slam him onto the cart. Splinters bite into his cheek. Cold mud sucks at his feet. He's lost one of his shoes. Blood runs from his lip, soaks into the spongy wood and runs down the slanted base of the cart towards the ground
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Re: Fill: Rubicon, (4/4)xahra99March 4 2011, 06:33:55 UTC
So..yeah. I still don't like this fic. I wanted to write a story about Esca, in the filmverse. As the film changes the place in the story when Esca is freed, the only possibility of writing Marcus/Esca without being stuck to a very very very narrow time slot was to make the sex essentially nonconsensual, seeing as one of the partners could not refuse, irrespective of what his feelings were. I think I would have more of a problem writing a story that represented that as a positive thing, possibly something even kinky, rather than a story that featured a rape scene that was pretty nasty to read but was probably pretty realistic when dealing with most slaves actual sexual experiences, given human nature. But I still don't like this one. Must write a happy, non.kinky fic...
Hatesex. It needs to happen between these two, somehow. Please make it happen. (If you want to work jealous!Marcus in there somewhere, I sure as hell won't stop you!)
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I still don't like this fic. I wanted to write a story about Esca, in the filmverse. As the film changes the place in the story when Esca is freed, the only possibility of writing Marcus/Esca without being stuck to a very very very narrow time slot was to make the sex essentially nonconsensual, seeing as one of the partners could not refuse, irrespective of what his feelings were. I think I would have more of a problem writing a story that represented that as a positive thing, possibly something even kinky, rather than a story that featured a rape scene that was pretty nasty to read but was probably pretty realistic when dealing with most slaves actual sexual experiences, given human nature.
But I still don't like this one. Must write a happy, non.kinky fic...
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