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Apr 23, 2011 18:06

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  • MORE MOD NOTES: Alright guys I know this fandom is really into historical accuracy and all that jazz but here's the thing.  This is a KINK MEME and therefore historical accuracy is not ( Read more... )

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Fill: Passion and Profession, 1c/? anonymous May 10 2011, 18:21:04 UTC
Controlling his anger taxed his mind; checking his passion wearied his spirit. Jane had accused him of lacking passion, turned down his proposal of marriage because he could not, would not show her the spirit and ardor she craved; now she was, he had no doubt, under the roof of Mr. Rochester, risking her mortal soul for fleeting love and more base affections. Poor, wayward Jane, so misunderstanding. Not incurious or thick, but simply blind to the feelings and urges of those other than herself. For St. John had passion, passion burning and bubbling up out of him, scarcely controlled during the day and often keeping him awake at night so he paced the decks under the stars, a familiar sight to the night watches. Reverend Crow they called him, and he did not take offense, aware as he was of how it looked for him to stalk the ship's deck in his greatcoat and hat even during the humid rainstorms that plagued this part of the globe.

My dear Jane Eyre, how do you not know? Each of us mortals is but a line on a ship, passive and patient, ( ... )

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 2f/? treehouse_kid May 13 2011, 22:09:27 UTC
Yay! I am completely loving this so far!! Also, very clever with the little mouse over-y things, approval. :D Keep up the brilliant work!!

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 2f/? augustbird May 13 2011, 22:28:03 UTC
i don't know this canon but omg this is so brilliantly written! i can't tell you how impressed i am with how well you've adopted the style of the era. you're single-handedly making me want to watch the original material and i'm not even the biggest fan of this era in history. xD

looking forward to next friday, nonny <3

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 2f/? poziomeczka May 13 2011, 22:33:06 UTC
OH GOD. I could roll around in this for the next century. I can't even leave an insightful comment like this fic obviously deserves. Because IT IS PERFECTION.

LIKE, IT READS LIKE A FUCKING CLASSIC NOVEL. JUST SEXIER.

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 2f/? anonymous May 14 2011, 04:27:37 UTC
I'm really intrigued by this story! :) St. John was never a favorite of mine, but this fic is making me interested in him as a character, even outside of St. John/Marcus possibilities. And I'm really amazed by your attention to detail in trying to capture the period.

[So I hope you won't mind that I have a few nitpicks: You keep referring to 'reading/writing Hindu' when it should be 'Hindi,' a 'Hindu' being a person who follows Hinduism. Also, just out of curiosity, what are you using as a source for the Hindi and the Bengali?]

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 2f/? anonymous May 15 2011, 03:10:14 UTC
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! I don't mind if you nitpick, as long as I can nitpick back :)

** referring to the "Hindu language" (or Hindustani) rather than the "Hindi language" is incorrect now but perfectly appropriate for the 1840s (OED -- Colebrooke in Life (1873) "In the vernacular dialects, or even in the Hindu language [i.e. Sanskrit].")

** my Hindi comes from Google Translate, which is then transliterated. It's probably crap but IDGAF because life is short and I've got some porn to write. My "Bengali" is also Hindi, because Google Translate doesn't do Bengali.

** if Hindu/Hindi bugs you I HIGHLY suggest avoiding Chapter 13 (In which the Rev. St. John is forcefully and repeatedly violated by a Tentacle Monster)

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 2f/? civilbloodshed May 15 2011, 06:50:02 UTC
HNNNNNNNG. CHAPTER 13 CANNOT COME FAST ENOUGH. *_________________*

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 2f/? poziomeczka May 15 2011, 10:03:08 UTC
....can we have a little taste of chapter 13? yes?

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Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) anonymous May 17 2011, 17:06:20 UTC
NONNY WAS KIDDING. THERE IS NO TENTACLE MONSTER.

fine. here are some tentacles.

Chapter 13*

In which the Rev. St. John experiences a Mortification of the Flesh without ever removing his Trousers

*not the actual chapter 13St. John leaned back against the sandalwood tree, looking out over the placid surface of the lake. Such a tranquil scene; it soothed the mind just to gaze at it. Water lapped at the toes of his boots and leaves rustled overhead, trembling with each passing breeze. He felt himself drifting off as sleep overtook his weary body ( ... )

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Re: Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) anonymous May 17 2011, 17:08:58 UTC
PFFFFT I love you.

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Re: Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) civilbloodshed May 17 2011, 17:16:04 UTC
HOW ARE YOU SO GREAT, ANON??! Ferreal tho, it's taken way too long for tentacles to show up on this meme, but this is an EXCELLENT START.

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Re: Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) coeurdesoleil May 17 2011, 17:18:59 UTC
:DDDDDDD
ANON I LOVE YOU.

THIS IS THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ.

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Re: Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) poziomeczka May 17 2011, 17:38:03 UTC
*DOLPHIN NOISES*

ALL MY LOVE. IT GOES OUT TO YOU.

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Re: Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) eleanor_lavish May 17 2011, 18:07:49 UTC
DEAR NONNY, I NEVER THOUGHT YOU MEANT REAL TENTACLES, BUT HOSHIT, I AM TRYING NOT TO LAUGH AT MY DESK RIGHT NOW. A+++++++++, DEAR AUTHOR!

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Re: Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) floatxxaway May 17 2011, 19:16:08 UTC
CAUGHT UP ON THIS AND LOVING IT. LOVE YOUR WORDS.

ALSO LOLOLOL THIS CHAPTER <3

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Re: Notreallya!Fill: Curiosities of India (NC-17 for non-con and tentacles) the_eagle_mod May 18 2011, 01:29:33 UTC
Hey there, Anon. I was wondering how you wanted this tagged. Would you like it tagged as a separate fill? Or leave it untagged and have it stand as part of the original fill? Let me know! :)

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