jpop ficlet slow movement shige/tegoshi 1/1

[thawrecka]

Serious writer's block. I mean, I know, I should just write anyway and I'm trying but I just can't focus. This little holiday block has been the only time when my arms haven't hurt when typing, too, so I should have taken advantage of it but right now even little scraps are too hard to finish. Anyway

Comments

[anamuan]

you point out its shortness, but i like it a lot. it's short! (rofl my attention span these days). ok, but seriously, i would call it 'telling.' a lot is going on that you aren't spelling out in too many words.

[thawrecka]

Well, I do a lot of telling. I'm not much for show in fic as am crap at description. I do like writing short things, though.

[anamuan]

i see that as talent. being succinct is often overlooked