Lilahfic: Games We Play in Summer

[thawrecka]

My Lilahficathon entry is done, if fairly sub-par

Comments

[lasultrix]

I like this! It has an interestingly dark tone - the end line makes me shiver.

Wesley seemed to be scorching hot that summer. He burned to touch. Lilah couldn't imagine him in a nice cool office without thinking of the temperature around him slowly rising.

Lines like this make the fic feel like remembrance, like we already know how short-lived their relationship will be. And Wesley always gone when Lilah wakes up...

"How about when I slid under the table and went down on you in that restaurant?"

I think I'm just going to melt over here.

[thawrecka]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, as I was feeling somewhat insecure about it.

[inyron]

Aww, I like it, thank you. And thank you for fufilling my unorthodox-place-mention request twice. Mmm.

[thawrecka]

I'm glad you like it.

[viciouswishes]

Most men couldn't find the clitoris with a road map and detailed instructions

So very true.

Hot and you did a great job with Lilah. Though I really like that there's something else going on with her and Wesley that's not quite apparent.

[thawrecka]

Thank you for the feedback. It makes me happy my Lilah characterisation didn't suck and this story worked for you.